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Star Sage


Into many types of stories, though I'll admit, the most prevalent and enjoyable are vore and micro/macro situations. Founder of the group: Ponies, Big and Small

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A commissioned story, bought by benzema2912, who liked what I did with Pump It Up, and decided to see how I handled other growth scene. As such, obviously, this contains growth. Specifically of Scootaloo, thought the other CMC are indeed involved in it.

Applebloom and Sweetie Belle want to help Scootaloo out with her little problem of being the only pegasus in Ponyville unable to get her head into the clouds. As such they ask Zecora for some help, and get a potion to rectify the situation. Of course, as they things often do when involving the three, things get out of hoof, and Scootaloo finds herself growing up, instead of flying there. Read on dear viewer, and see where this growth ends...if it ever does.

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Loved it! :3 Thank you so much

Nice story, but there's some things you may want to edit.

The crapped, and rapidly becoming more so clubhouse.

That should be "cramped"... unless Scootaloo lost control of her bowels.

Worse, she was stuck in a room that was quickly getting to small for her.

That should be "too".

She was entranced then, staring at the ball ball below.

either that should be "blue ball", or you should delete one of those.

She didn't think too hard about it, afraid that doing so would break something inside her, and so she just kept backing up, soon starting to feel hotter and hotter, only just dodging out of the way as the sun, which like the moon grew every tinier.

And that should probably be "ever".

Infinite orange filling the known and unknown universe.

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Yeah, Isn't it the best thing? :3

Comment posted by livi423 deleted Nov 9th, 2016
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