Contemplations

P0nies #1 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

OK, so I'm not sure how this will turn out but I decided to give it a try. Not my usual type story, I prefer to write sad BUT I did owe it to somepony to write a different genre.

Earth Galvanising

Earth Galvanising #2 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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MY 1.bp.blogspot.com/-_TkbcIBMy1Y/T2Ioh3r-T_I/AAAAAAAABGA/BAJcgUhFm7c/s1600/firstpost.jpg RAMPAGE! YOU ENDED IT! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Rutilus.Luna

Rutilus.Luna #3 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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That was not what I expected, but I laughed. So, well done for that. Have a thumbs up.

Parcly Taxel

Parcly Taxel #4 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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551587

MoonChill

MoonChill #5 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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only to been living needs correction. And may BOT take it lightly, needs to be not.
have wrote it in the first needs to be written it.

Heavy Weapons Guy

Heavy Weapons Guy #6 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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Uh...Heavy is Genuinely confused. The Game?

nemryn

nemryn #7 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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i.imgur.com/wBSB5.png

Isopod

Isopod #8 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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... The Game? Er... you lose? I don' understand.

P0nies

P0nies #9 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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552224>>552066 http://www.losethegame.com/

Isopod

Isopod #10 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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552429

I know of "The Game" but I don't see how it fits in. I guess I am not enough of a pro in The Game to understand.

P0nies

P0nies #11 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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552508 Maybe so.

Stalin the Stallion

Stalin the Stallion #12 · May 6th, 2012 · · ·

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i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Hi guys! Stalin and the crew are there!

i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png This particular long-shot was made due to Stalin's advice to autor "write a happy story", so i just can't not review it! Are you agree, crew?
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png Yeah! It's too rare to see somepony following your advices, boss.
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Indeed, i... WAIT! I suppose to be offended?
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png Nope.
i39.tinypic.com/35bxab6.png Vooooodkaaaa
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Good. Now, let's dig into Compilations: All but Destroyed!

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"She continued to write for the length of five minutes, coming to a stop when she barely had enough room to add her own signature."
i39.tinypic.com/35bxab6.png Eh, i KNEW it!
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Knew what?
i39.tinypic.com/35bxab6.png Twilight has graphomany!
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Ability to write your thoughts is not graphomany. It would be graphomany though if she'd make this letter four times bigger.

"He had explicit instructions not to bother her for anything. And that rule he followed very well, often falling asleep watching her from his soft, warm bed."
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png Twi, it's kinda creepy...

"he had forgot to blow out the candles yet again"
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png Well, knowing spike he'd rather light candles stronger than vlow them off. Firebreath and all :)
i43.tinypic.com/18cfvt.png Impudent morgels!
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png Ohai, Baha!
i43.tinypic.com/18cfvt.png Don't dare to call me this, flea! And what is with that comment of thou? HOW DARE YOU to talk like this about dragons?!
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png What of it?
i43.tinypic.com/18cfvt.png We dragons can CONTROL our fire b..
i39.tinypic.com/35bxab6.png "His mouth is moving but he is soundless... Am i drunk too much?"
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png "No, it's my new awesome sound controller device! A gift from Cauterium! It can mute everything. And while he continues to preach, let's continue our stalinview!"

"To her, it probably wasn't that big of a deal, only to been living for a mere fifteen years."
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Tsk tsk, a problematic topic. I'd rather not to call mare 6's age, because everypony has different defenition of it. For some she is 20, for some she is 14 ect.
i43.tinypic.com/18cfvt.png Heh! You morgels are pathetic! Dragons are living for thousands of years!
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png What the heck? This thisg isnt working anymore?
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png What is it saying?

i43.tinypic.com/14ux72x.png DAMN CAUTERIUM! How much times i have to tell you not to use that goddamn operational system! This thing got blue screen of death!
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png ...What?
i43.tinypic.com/14ux72x.png ...Never mind. Bill's fault
i39.tinypic.com/35bxab6.png What bill?

"watched as the letter burst into flames and the was melted away into the ashes below"
i42.tinypic.com/1r4u8n.png Is scroll made of metal? How paper can melt?

OVERVIEW:

i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Well, that story was a lot of fun! But there's one thing in it, not all ponies can get it. Your brain must be bigger than donut to understand it, but still thre are some ponies who havent got it
I don't get it!
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png We dont care Baha, we don't care.

i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Anyway, as i mentioned before, deer autor
i40.tinypic.com/30rwjmo.png You mean "dear"?
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Well, yes. But i like deers! And stop distracting me!
i40.tinypic.com/bjbmvs.png Anyway, this proves my words that you CAN write not-depressing fic. As a first work it has some minor flaws with understandance, but still is very enjoyable if reader get it.

VERDIKT: Good work!

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