The Quest for a Discount

Some would spin tales just for attention, while others leaned on exaggerating the truth to seem more mighty. Then there was me; I was just a drake looking for a good drink and place to relax. I just hadn't realized my story would catch up with me, the wastes were never kind to a drake.

This story is a crossover with Fallout but it is not associated with the FoE Universe.

Editor: Bahatumay
Proofreaders: Bahatumay, Hawthornbunny

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Cold Spike

Cold Spike #1 · Feb 5th, 2015 · · ·

*cricket* *cricket* *cricket*

Albert Manhattan

Albert Manhattan #2 · Feb 5th, 2015 · · ·

Not bad, not bad at all. Well written, but the story didn't really seem to go anywhere, like this was only the beginning.

I think if I have one real complaint, it's that I feel like it needs more description in terms of world building. Even so, (coming from someone who knows nothing about Fallout) I could still understand what was going on perfectly fine. All around, good job.

Luna Aeterna Solutae

Luna Aeterna Solutae #3 · Feb 7th, 2015 · · ·

Nuka-Break?

Cold Spike

Cold Spike #4 · Feb 7th, 2015 · · ·

5599086 For all of your Nuka needs!

Luna Aeterna Solutae

Luna Aeterna Solutae #5 · Feb 8th, 2015 · · ·

5599494 Neat.

LightningStrike34

LightningStrike34 #6 · Dec 23rd, 2020 · · ·

A large menacing growl interrupted my thoughts. I slowly turned around and thanked whatever gods were left that I had been listening. A large reptilian creature stood before me. In comparison to undead ponies it was like looking in a very disturbing mirror. He had claws like mine, he lacked wings just like me. Sharp teeth could be seen, with thick drool seeping down. Deathclaws, they called them. While I lacked his horns, we both walked on two legs. He was just as tall as me and had the same predatory stare I often gave ponies. I reached for my gun, but it was faster. Intense pain soared through my chest and I quickly pushed it off of me. I reached out with my claw and quickly aimed for his face. I didn’t have time to check my injuries, I just knew it hurt like Tartarus to move and I felt wet. It tried to kick me, but I used my addrelenlin to grab his legs and took a bite out of him. There was an old saying I once heard, monkey see, monkey do. I don’t know where it came from, but for this moment I made a monkey out of it. He kicked my face in, then tackled me to the ground, it intended to bite me and end the fight. I was ready for it and I breathed out with all of my might, a yelp could be heard for miles as his face was quickly charred. He still tried to bite me, so I reached for my pistol and shot through his face several times, until he finally stopped moving.

*adrenaline

Cold Spike

Cold Spike #7 · Dec 25th, 2020 · · ·

10594405
Fixed, though you probably didn't need to quote the entire segment.

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