Angel once again is causing problems for poor Fluttershy and runs to the Everfree with her in chase only to be stalk by a strange creature. Who seem to thinks Fluttershy is a Butterfly.
This idea I got from watching Clash of clan P.E.K.K.A video.
As well as playing the game and using P.E.K.K.A in the game.
So people who play Clash of clans will get what going on in this story lol.
link to said video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SvrcUgBGjXs
People who read my stories know I have problems with spelling and Grammar, with my disability i have. So i apologize if there are mistakes .
P.E.K.K.A and clash clan own by Supercell
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It's a cute idea, I'll give it that. The problem is you have a very, VERY high amount of grammar and spelling errors.
That being said, I believe that no one should ever be told not to do something they enjoy (if it's constructive like writing). You should at the very least, however, try to get someone to proofread and edit for you before publishing.
No matter how cute the story is, the grammar and spelling issues stand out far more than the story, and will drive people away from bothering to read it at all.
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Agreed.
You do know Clash of Clans refers to P.E.K.K.A. as a female, right?
Equitis it's not fair because my story had better grammar (not calling the writer stupid or anything like that) and mine didn't get accepted