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The Everfree Forest is on a rampage. The forest itself is expanding, spreading its dark roots into the surrounding areas, engulfing everything in its path. The culprit behind this unexpected attack is from one lone, greedy spirit. His name is Everfree. The rogue spirit resides somewhere deep within his forest, using his powers to make his forest grow and expand, taking more land from the Equestrians.

While the ponies of Equestria try to find a way to deal with the Everfree Forest, one little pony was already tending to the problem right now. Having been sent by the Parliament of Trees, this champion of The Green only have one task at hoof, to stop the expansion of the Everfree Forest.

In order to this, she must confront this rogue spirit, within his own forest.

Cover Art by
Eosphorite

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Pretty epic tale! I especially liked how Applejack wouldn't be some mindless "Yes" pony and stuck to her guns on her act of mercy, and was smart about it as well! Beautifully done, friend! :ajsmug:

What is this a crossover with?

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This is a crossover with the Swamp Thing. Its from the DC line of comics.

This. This was painful to read. Its an alright story with the worst grammar I've ever come across. It shouldn't even be in the popular stories. Get an editor so I can finish this garbage

I know there is more of the cover art. (The same theme) does that mean your going to write more? you better do!:pinkiehappy:

But, then tragedy struck and her life came to a tragic end.
The day of her tragic death

That's a hell of a lot of tragic tragedy.

This is just bad...I wasn't even able to make it halfway before I had to stop. Get an editor. Redundant phrasing, poor structure, "show;don't tell" errors abound, and so much more.

Very nicely done. It's got some rough spots, mostly editing and grammar stuff, but still great fun. Bravo.

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