• Member Since 27th Jan, 2015
  • offline last seen Feb 11th, 2015

Icu Zelith


Just a simple living organism with hopes of sharing my creativity. Prepare to be Astonished!

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When unicorn by the name of Storm Watcher falls madly in love with a pegasus named Midnight, only death can stop him from getting back to her. This is a story of a stallion and his journey through the toughest of events.

This story will occasionally change p.o.v. depending on the part of the storyline. This story also has the potential to have spelling/grammar errors. So if you happen to come across any, I would greatly appreciate it if you told me. Without further to do, here it is!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 4 )

Saw a couple of spelling errors so thought I would mention them and you could fix them

'This is what I get for going on to the forest' I think to myself.

Should be into.

Without any warning, the docto, followed by the nurse, comes inside my room and greets me.

Correct spelling is doctor.

"Umm, I you don't mind me asking, how did I get here?" I politely ask.

Forgot the f in If

5571443 Heh,:twilightsheepish: good eye. I'll get those corrected right away. Thanks!

5571473 your welcome also great story so far cant wait for the rest

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