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Gdenofa 1019

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    • My Little Angel (Bunny vs. Changeling)
      Fluttershy is surprised on the sudden 'change' of her beloved bunny who has suddenly become quite

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    When Angel returns from picking carrots, Fluttershy finds him seeming to be more responsible and willing to be helpful without being asked. Her mood goes from delighted to confused when they are confronted by another "Angel"  

    Picture done by DA Artist Xyotic

    First Published
    6th May 2012
    Last Modified
    6th May 2012

    Comments ( 36 )

    #1 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Nicely done. :twilightsmile:

    #2 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>549435

    Thankies!

    #3 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Geat job,:heart: I can only hope the rest of her friends are this understanding(not likely:twilightoops:)

    #4 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    so. much. D'AAAAAWWWWW:rainbowkiss::yay:

    #5 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>550130

    Yes, Angel is a little Changeling's Teddy Bunny XD

    #6 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>550080

    Their not Fluttershy, but they should get over the don't judge a bug by his cover if the little guy keeps up with his cuteness... XD

    #7 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Mane 6 Reactions to Dragonfly: :yay::twilightoops::applejackconfused::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::duck:

    #8 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>550635

    LOL but with those big baby blue's how can you say no to that XD

    #9 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    hmmm

    #10 · Chapter 4 · 53w, 7h ago · · ·
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    all these changeling stories almost always have fluttershy taking care of them RAINBOW FACES:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:o:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowderp:

    #11 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    aww...so cute:pinkiesmile:

    #12 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That's so damn cute :twilightsmile:

    I would love to read a sequel with Dragonfly living a normal life in Ponyville.

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>619722

    Aw thanks so much! :yay: If I had the time, I would.

    #14 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yay Thankies! :rainbowkiss:

    #15 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Could do with an elaboration, but nice fiction.

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Thanks, was just a short fic that was stuck in my head (tried to keep the feel of the series) thanks for the fav YAY:yay:

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That is so freakishly adorable I may have just gotten Diabeetus from it.

    And I must admit, I think the little guy is well on his way to becoming a useful member of pony society.

    And possibly the first changeling to get a cutie-mark (for helping, of course. Maybe a halo? :raritywink:)

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Thanks so much! :twilightsmile:

    Sorry, do you need an insulin shot?! Sorry for the cuteness overload there...:rainbowkiss:

    Gah.. a little changeling with a Halo cutie mark... gonna keel over... give me that insulin back:twilightoops:

    #19 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Adorable little fic

    Changling fics have already fallen into something of a formula and this mixes it up in an enjoyable way. Plus Angel Bunny POV was enjoyable, he may be a little jerk much of the time but he's got his heart in the right place. I find that 'epiphany' bit a nice touch to add to the Changling mythos... it makes sense in a way that fits with FIM's love and tolerance universe. Shame that Changlings as a species are greedy and sneaky, it would never occur to them likely :fluttercry:

    Are you thinking on expanding this at all in a sequel? Dragonfly being introduced to ponyville one pony at a time? angel's revelations being made (with ironicly far less ease) by Twi?

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 51w, 9m ago · · ·
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    Thank you for the great comment!:raritywink:

    The changeling craze seems to be all over with focusing on one of the main six's reaction with them. I adore Angel even if he can be a spoiled brat most of the time and decided to let him shine for once and show his true colors. My own bunny had past away and this was sort of a tribute... being bunny related.

    I tried to work in the series perspective mixed with Angel's thoughts so glad you liked it. Right now I am working on another story (non-pony related) so I am kinda tied up right now... but I am honored that you liked this so much to see more. Too bad this could not be put into an episode!:unsuresweetie: Would love to see Dragonfly giving Angel a squeeze:yay:

    #21 · Chapter 4 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>550635

    I believe you mean: :yay: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile: :ajsmug: :raritystarry:

    #22 · Chapter 4 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ...very well

    #23 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ...The...Adorable...It makes my eyes all wet... :fluttercry:

    #24 · Chapter 4 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This story story is soooo sweet i like it hats off to you :moustache:

    #25 · Chapter 4 · 25w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Feels. :pinkiehappy:

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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    fascinating but suspense is lost because of character tags and the introducing pic, i am still pulled in mind you.

    #27 · Chapter 4 · 21w, 3d ago · · ·
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    well it was short and very sweet.

    I would enjoy a squeal.

    however i believe it was not really sad (which was perhaps a good thing as it gives it "good feels") nor "adventure" nor was it that random at all it is my only complaint as i find it incredibly cute, exactly what i expected a cute flutter/changing fic.

    heck that changing helped my head cannon.

    (interestingly i am here because i saw your comment on the pic on DA)

    seriously i repeat the top two statements.:yay:

    #28 · Chapter 4 · 21w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Thanks, a bunch. I took out adventure and sad tag since I think I marked those by  accident and I just noticed now:facehoof:

    It was just a little idea that popped in my head. I didn't think too many people would fav it but happy it is being noticed:pinkiehappy:

    I don't have any plans for continuing this tale right now, but if I ever do I will surely post it here:yay:

    #29 · Chapter 4 · 20w, 5d ago · · ·
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    http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/359/7/2/moar_by_patchy684-d5p3lpe.png

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    target acquired; firing D'AAWWWW nuke in 3....2....1...

    #31 · Chapter 4 · 20w, 10h ago · · ·
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    SO SAD :raritydespair:

    but So HAPPY:pinkiehappy:

    #32 · Chapter 4 · 18w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Very nice. :pinkiehappy: I too wouldn't mind a sequel with Fluttershy's friends reactions. I always like seeing more good Angel stories as well.

    #33 · Chapter 4 · 15w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy:

    :heart:

    :raritystarry:

    #34 · Chapter 4 · 15w, 4h ago · · ·
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    I hate to break character BUT.

    This here story is my personal favorite at the moment.

    Have a herb !

    #35 · Chapter 4 · 15w, 2h ago · · ·
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    >>2062093

    Thank you! :twilightsmile:

    #36 · Chapter 4 · 13w, 5d ago · 1 · ·
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    An enjoyable story. Good job. I'm actually hopeful for a sequel. There are many ways you can take this story and I hope you consider it. :ajsmug:

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