While stargazing with Luna, Celestia notices her sister behaving strangely. While Celestia wishes on a star, Luna weeps for one.
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Wonderful! Added to Sad Luna.
5561922 Cool! Glad you liked it!
Accepted into the Sibling Story Stockpile.
In any other story, Celestia would be portrayed with a small or lack-of-interest in the night. Other then it being a tapestry of her sister's, of course. It's refreshing to see this dynamic on their characters, and I honestly find this to be the most suitable. I also like the little astronomy details - ignoring the elephant in the room; shooting stars. Well done, and onto your other works.
I don't care if it's wrong astronomy-wise.
This is a nice little story about two characters stargazing (something I wish people would write more of, as whole story or just a prolonged scene). I enjoy the contrast between their reactions, even if the difference between the two sisters personalities isn't as drastic as some writers have, you still feel both of them shine.
7174552 Thank you! This is one of those stories I often forget I wrote so it always surprises me when it gets love.
A nice story, and some interesting headcanon taking advantage of the differences in our worlds. Everything between the two sisters was very sweet.
Would like to point out, though, every instance of "it's" in the story, except the last one, in dialog, should have been "its".
That was beautiful!!! I really liked the bonding of the sisters...And it was a really clever idea, too!
Were you implying that Equestria is a world long after our own? It just felt so sad that it was Sirius dying; it's long been the brightest star in our sky...