Blood is only as deep as you can spill from your enemies

ME GUSTA i love the new cover art!

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Look...what you did here with semi-colons? There's really no other way to describe it other than rape. You RAPED this poor little semi-colon. What did it ever do to you to deserve being put through this kind of pain?

Two suggestions:

First, take a remedial English course until you know what punctuation marks are supposed to be used for.

Second, take a creative writing class so you know how to show, not tell.

There's so much more I'm missing, but I can't do this anymore.

what will happen tomarrow

A very heartwarming story. Look forward to more of it.

This story has a special place in my heart, and I hope by the end of it you will have one too.

>>567332567332

I took a look back and realized that there is a semi-colon issue but it is layered down from when I first proofread it, so it is a little better. When I go through the rest , I'll make sure that they get used less

Great story, it's really cute. Can't wait to see where it goes!

You know, being a mother changed Dash for the better. I'm sure parenthood does that to people.

SO FREAKIN' ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!

appon reading this i think something wonderful will happin followed by a calm time then a huge shitstorm

>>567332567332

WHY YOU BE MEAN? THIS IS PONIES!!! YOU BE NICE OR BE SENT TO MOON!!!

well this feels oddly familiar....my little dashie anyone?

I'll admit my little Dashie is partly responsible for this story, but I'm not trying to copy it. I love my little Dashie and have the utmost respect for the author. I know it looks the same now but give it time and you'll see that its not.

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I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

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wait he isnt a grounded pegasus is he

who wants to go on a manhunt for the bastard that disliked this?

Thank you FireFlash13231, but thats not nessecary, love and tolerate bronies. I thank you for your support though.

D'AWWWWW

>>576064576064 just overreacting. I'm devoted to the awesomeness that is RBD. Your story impresses me! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm just waiting for my proofreader to send it back I want it up as much as you guys.

Ok everypony I just recived word that chapter 4 can be expected around Monday or Tuesday I know you all want to see more sooner, but my proofreader has work of his own so we all just have to wait. I hope this at least helps a little.

>>576057576057

i do

>>588288588288 Guys I appreciate your love for the story I really do I'm touched. But going on a man hunt wont make those dislikes disapear. The best thing you can do is read the story as it gets updated and give me feedback. I as a brony am going to follow our code "Love and Tolerate the fuck out of you"

>>rainbowdashderp: Im glad you see that the guy who disliked this has no idea what good Rainbow Dash fanfics look like.

>>Brawney Hooves: I totally understand the tolerance for dislikes, but im still annoyed that anyone disliked this. you rule, brawney hooves!

>>590593590593 You guys are great. Its nice to see someone like my story with a passion. I've done stories for school, but noone has ever reacted so strongly to my work. I apreciate it and I hope to have the next chapter up very soon, and I'm sorry its taking so long.

>>590721590721 no problem, as long as you put it up when its done! cant wait!

this is making me daww as much as my little dashie did

>>595776595776 You have no idea how happy I am to hear you say that.

Haha im glad your happy now make me happy and keep typing this story:P

>>597223597223 I'll try to get it up tonight.

man that was to cutesey i urgh .........diabetes  keep writing  this is awsome

Damn Sky Tearer is an asshole

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"No one messes with my son!"

ohhh sky is so dead

Sky Tearer is screwed now, you don't take RD's child's poster of the Wonderbolts and get away with it.

Poor RD lost her chance with Soarin. But hey, there's plenty of other good stallion candidates for RD's mate. There probably at least a few Wonderbolts who are males

I must have more

I already sent the next chapter, so now I just play the waiting game.>>601829601829

ME GUSTA  

ME GUSTA  

ME GUSTA

ME GUSTA

ME GUSTA

*read the part about sky terror*  

@#$%$^^%%$ no me ^%$#%$# gusta

sky terror should be make in to either a rainbow or some cupcakes man what a #!@% he  is an @$$$%^&*#&@)$%

that pony is going to #&!! pony #&!!

this story is great but sky terror *loads shotgun* is to be terminated in the worst most painful way possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!

>>601988601988my reaction reading that comment

Both Soarin, Spitfire, and Dash laughed.

Hate to be that guy, but both shouldn't have been used there.

However, this is still one of the best fics I have ever read, keep up the good work!

>>602242602242 Its fine I can take critasism, and I'm glad that you like the story.

this is good but i cant keep thinking what happened to scootaloo

>>602119602119 Just wait.

>>602281602281 What do you mean what happened to Scootaloo?

well it feels weird she isnt in a story about rainbow dash i would expect her to stil be around her but its your story i guess im just used to fanatic scootaloo stories

>>602401602401 The cutie mark crusaders arent really part of my story. They make a small appearance in the next chapter, but I will try to squeeze them in later.

Nopony is gonna mess with Clay RBD is sooooo gonna get him for that.....

>>602553602553 I knew that people wouldnt like Sky, but I never expected such hate when I made him and if you think hes bad...wait til you meet his dad.

>>603043603043 Dun dun dunnnnnn

Edit: Sky does get his butt kicked right?

>>603377603377 Spoilers.

This sky terror done pissed me off i hope he gets his legs riped off and beaten with them!...

But your the auther so i know it will work out

Keep up the good work bud im looking forward to the next chapter

>>603398603398 Damn Skys getting more hate than Draco Malfoy...wait.

>>603043603043 o  hell  no make them both sky terror and his dad in to rainbows

sky terror the terminator will come out and kick your @$$

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>>605524605524 No! Nopony is being made into a cupcake! I hate that story!

>>606242606242

what about rainbows then?

>>607282607282 I was thinking of doing a grim dark where Rainbow leaves the rainbow factory to Clay...

>>607459607459

It sounds like a interesting read.

>>609117609117 Its just an idea, but if people want me to write it I will.

>>609135609135

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i meant sky terror going in to the rainbow factory not clay and rainbow how would clay take over it he cant walk on clouds

besides clay

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but i will read anything you write besuse every time i read wings for a pony it makes me

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>>610364610364 To clarify Sky would be in the story and as for Clay gettting to the factory...well thats a secerate.

Wow what a douche bag seriously cant wait for the next chapter when is it?

>>611570611570 Hopfully sometime today.

>>611584611584 yay

>>611584611584

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>>606242606242

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>>617792617792 I really do. The only association I will write about cupcakes is a story I'm working on called healing a rainbow.

>>567332567332

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You got me close to manly tears with this. I have never and I don't plan on crying over a story (okay I cried while reading Harry Potter... and Marley and Me, but those are extreme exceptions) what I'm trying to say is that you have a talent for causing your readers to have appropriate emotional reactions and I really enjoy this story so far. I want the kid to fly, and I look forward to reading along.

>>629417629417 Thank you, but just to warn you...expect more sad moments, but not too many. Also I appreciate your honesty. By the way have you read my little Dashie yet? I can guerentee that story will have you crying your eyes out. I know I did.

Its so beautiful

wow that was sad cant wait for the next chapter

Lovely. I did cry, but I'm a girl so it's totally allowed.

I also have to tell you that this story was one of a few inspirations for my story "The Importance of Being Earth Ponies." So thank you for that too!

And one little typo in there- “I think I know what might cheer you up.” She lifted him up and placed me on the ground.

Anyway, great job!

is this a "be careful what you wish for" thing?

>>629542629542Glad I could inspire someone to write. And I cant wait to read it when its done...can you give me the details yet?

>>629548629548 No its more of a discover whats really important story. And a finding out where you belong story

>>629549629549

It's actually done, it was a one shot. Your past chapters got me thinking about, well, earth pony pride for lack of a better term, and how they see themselves. The story is here: The Importance of Being Earth Ponies

so you think you can make me cry? i am tougher than you think, my little dashie almost made me cry but not quite. in other words CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

>>629816629816 I'm not trying to make anyone cry I'm just telling a story...but if you want it you've got it!

>>629875629875....CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

Hmmmm.... I can see where this is going

rainbow dash has a talk with sky terror?

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also this is the best chapter yet

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bawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

YAAAAY CHAPTER 5!!!!!

PS: who wants to go on a manhunt for the bastards that disliked this?

Edit: a....talk. hehehehe ME GUSTA.

also: d'awwwwww........

Bro I love your work man please keep up the good work your freaking amazing!!!

>>FireFlash13231

HELL YEAH!!!

>>631099631099 I've got torches for the manhunt. Does anypony have enough pitchforks and weapons and stuff?

>>FireFlash13231

I have a big whacking stick, two pitchforks, a regular fork, and a spork. Where do I sign up for the angry mob?

>>630863630863

>>631316631316 blog post, anything really to spread the word of this story. This story is to awesome to be disliked by even anti-bronies, unless they are the kind of people that start world wars from hate, like Hitler.

Dis story is so darned cute :3

>>631546631546 Guys we cant spread a message of love and tolerate if we keep going on man hunts just because of a stupid button. I know you guys like the story, but I belive in a better world of tolerance and friendship...and ponies.

>>631763631763 ponies, yes. love and tolerance, mostly. But I will severely dislike on people that hate on d'awwwwww stories like this one.

>>633128633128 I dont like it anymore than you do. But honestly I cant do anything about it. I do look forward to seeing what you and the others think of the story as it goes along so keep me posted I spend a lot of time on my pc, so I can give you a response pretty soon.