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coolstorybrah

Just some random pegasister who stalks you... Oh and loves you too

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Firefly decides to visit her dear friend, Silver Wing. She brings Rainbow Dash along, hoping that she could befriend Silver's eight-year old son, Soarin.

What could go wrong?

Edited by: That Brony Over There
Chapters (1)
On Hiatus Published: Jan 27th, 2015 Download
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Darthdarius117
Darthdarius117 #1 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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This has RD and Soarin. Why is there no romance tag?:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::twilightblush:

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coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #3 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5555319 have you read the story? theyre foals, they dont really think about that:twilightsheepish:
sorry but later on though:raritywink:

Dusk_Writer
Dusk_Writer #4 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Awesome can't wait for next chapter:pinkiehappy:

Darthdarius117
Darthdarius117 #5 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Lol I knew that this was gonna be a friendshipping fic I was just messing around. :rainbowwild:

Rainbow87dash
Rainbow87dash #6 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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I see the potential, faved.

Mr mustash
Mr mustash #12 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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So I haven't red this yet but in the comments you sed that there would be romanc latter on, dose that mean that in latter chapters, or are you planing on finishing this story and makeing a sequel? :duck: :trixieshiftright:

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #13 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5558225 no theyre not falling in love, but theyre gonna become besties and later on, something else.:raritywink:
but not on this, theres gonna be more stories of them as foals, so expect a lot of these stories.:pinkiehappy:
and their relationship will become stronger.
does that sound confusing?:rainbowlaugh:
sorry, im talking too much right now...:rainbowlaugh:

Mr mustash
Mr mustash #15 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5558280 so no romance in this one and maybe in latter ones?

Tom From Myspace
Tom From Myspace #16 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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I won't throw a thumbs up your way because I believe it should be proofread a little more first. If you would like an editor, send me a PM. This is nice, but grammar mistakes always catches my attention, and usually keep me from voting if there's enough.

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #17 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5558347 I'm sorry. It's just I'm not that good with editing and English, you said you would help me?
Sorry:twilightblush:

Tom From Myspace
Tom From Myspace #19 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5558368 Sure. If you don't write in Google Docs, then start. It's easiest to edit with. Copy this and anything else you have so far into a doc and share it with me with the ability to comment or edit (I'll leave that choice to you). I'll PM you my email address.

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #20 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5558398 yyayayayayayay!! Thank you very much!
Do you mind if I do it tomorrow though? It's kind of a free day at my school, so I have the time.
Thanks!

VagueDrake
VagueDrake #22 · Jan 28th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Well, that was a cliffhanger. Looking good so far, though! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #25 · Jan 30th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5566219 sorry, one tiny question, can i do it in Microsoft Word or only google doc

Gypsy Heart
Gypsy Heart #26 · Jan 30th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Awwww, Dashie is super duper adorableeee.:twilightblush:
Can't wait for more. :)))

Tom From Myspace
Tom From Myspace #27 · Jan 30th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5566284 It's easiest for us to work together on gdocs.

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #29 · Jan 31st, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5568186 okay thank you, sorry for the whole inconvinience, ill send it to you tomorrow
im truly sorry, ive just been very busy, and it wanst a free day at my school after all:twilightangry2:

Neroson40
Neroson40 #31 · Feb 2nd, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Next Chapter... Please! *Dies of heart attack due to cuteness overload*

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #32 · Feb 2nd, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5577556 sorry for making you have a heart attack....:twilightsheepish:
next chapter will be out soon.:raritywink:
ive been pretty busy..:facehoof:

MyChemicalRomano
MyChemicalRomano #33 · Feb 5th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Awesome chapter!Btw, u remember me?Chu commented on my fic.Where's next chapter, I'm gonna go insane :pinkiecrazy:

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #34 · Feb 6th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5591098 yes I do.... :rainbowlaugh:
thanks sweettiiieee...:raritywink:

SoarinDashIsBestCouple
SoarinDashIsBestCouple #35 · Feb 17th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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'1w' in the comments. Saturday/sunday.

Right.




I WAN NEXT CHAPTER D:

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #36 · Feb 17th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5635753 heh, sorry...:twilightsheepish:
just been very busy with school and all that kind of stuff... life:facehoof:
its in progress though, so keep on the lookout!:pinkiegasp:

SoarinDashIsBestCouple
SoarinDashIsBestCouple #37 · Feb 20th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5637722


No problem... I have a story that's non-pony and not a fanfiction..

and it's probably been a week or two without me updating :twilightoops:

We shallt wait for thy story's next chapter. :yay:

Specter_Knight
Specter_Knight #41 · Apr 4th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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why was it so short but gud and ill like to see a sequal to this lol

coolstorybrah
coolstorybrah #42 · Apr 4th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5820593 thanks!:twilightsheepish:
There's gonna be more chapters anyways

MyChemicalRomano
MyChemicalRomano #43 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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Seems like your having an extremely busy life right now XD I understand, just assuming coz this has been gone for awhile

Matilda
Matilda #46 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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nice start :pinkiehappy: i already love this

Wand3r3r3
Wand3r3r3 #48 · Apr 25th, 2015 · · · "But I don't wanna go!" ·
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5879596 I wonder how streets up in the clouds work. :3

Anyway, this is so adorable! :heart: Love the little colt versions of everyone :heart:

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