This title reminds me of MvC3

wow, this is a good one,

ima watch it

MOAR

hmmm.... Interesting

Please comment, any kind is appreciated.

not bad ill keep this tracked and await further chapters keep up the good work

I wonser if twilight will freak out about the show?

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

>>4379743797

Goddamminit stop with the bot!

keep dis up!

>>4394443944

.....Did I miss something? What's the bot!?

>>4401644016

Meta Knight

>>4401644016

just about the only thing Meta Knight comments is "♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪"

i wonder how the ponies (particularly Twilight) will react to hearing about Christianity

Excellent

Man, Spike is going to be pissed off when the show reveals his crush on Rarity.

Not that it's that much of a secret.

I hope to see more of this soon dude!^_^

Now this is going to be interesting. Most HiE stories tend to tiptoe around the subject of where the knowledge the human has of ponies came from or the human flat out pretends to not know about Equestria. I'm curious to see how this straight forward approach will work out.

great

First! Gah been awhile since updated. Huh trollin failure is worse failure........Hmm in hindsight John had good reason to bring spikes treatment up. If really paid attention you can see why John is so ticked about it, now that it's actually pointed out I am too........

>>217614217614 Good Good, let the anger flow through you.

>>219891219891

GRRRRRRRRRRR-

redemption    

>>226912226912 confusion?

Lord Prince Blueblood....

this should be very... interesting

i need more!!! MOAR!!!!!!!!!!

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Nice chapter although there are a few mistakes that I've seen.

I really hope that you meant a tome instead of tomb since it would be a little odd for Fluttershy to have the remains of somepony in her house not to mention the opening and reading from it. Secondly, I believe the title is Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief. Granted I will give you the fact that Percy Jackson and the Lightning Theft actually makes a little more sense if you've read the book.

oh god yes!

well this is definitely interesting hes very open with our world cant wait for more!

Hello everypony, this may seem like an odd question, but I'd like to ask you all quick question.

Does the character, John, seem like a "Gary Stu" and if so? How badly?

Forgive me, but it's something that really bugs me and I'd really appreciate some feedback to hush my paranoia.

they got the gun! oh there unconsius wait are there two?

>>443048443048

Sorry? That last part confused me.

you used they a lot so it cant be a mistake so are there two royal whatevers

>>443056443056

Ah, yes. My apologies.

I don't think he's a gary stu, well long as he has his faults n not invincible it shouldn't be but either way i like this hope to updates soon.

.40 S&W. John is now bro-tier in my book.

"Lunar goddess of Woobies"

What is with the glow?

Did John find them?

>>489739489739 I might be wrong, but my theory is that Nightmare Moon is causing him to have bad dreams every night, until he does some sort of task...

so is this cancelled or did you just die?

>>688501688501

No, the fan fic  isn't cancelled, nor am I dead. The chapter currently being written is...difficult but needed. Trust me, once this chapter is out I'll be pumping out more chapter faster.

i always new that blueblood was a cheky bugger

Spotted several spelling errors, especially towards the end.

For example:

"deft" instead of "deaf"

"spin" instead of "spine"

Long time no read my friend.

Good to see you continue this story.

>>12506641250664

Yeah, summer was far from ideal, and a lack of a reliable proof-reader didn't help

But yeah, I'm back and ready for action!

>>12506771250677

HURRA!!!

lolz so good.

Oh mother of god.

Sigh... John is such a pessimist.....

u got spike taken away from twilight you sinister bastard.

Otacon has been veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery lonely since Naomi died............

“Quidditch.”

Oh god.

>>21815822181582 You have no idea how long I've wanted to mention the idea of Quidditch to the ponies.

>>22131162213116 Maybe.....