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Jason Parker is a retired U.S. Army Rangers officer and the leader of a human resistance group know as The Jaguars. The world is cast into utter chaos as Equestria commences a genocide of humaity through ponification. The situation is dire, but it is not the human way to simply allow themselves to be detered by fear. The Jaguars boldy stand against the ponies' genocide, and they do not stand alone

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After doing much brainstorming, plot planning, and rewriting, this is the final result. I definitely think this is better than the original, and hope you guys like it. Plus, now that I've mostly got the plot figured out, it should hopefully be an open road from here! :pinkiehappy: So, is it better than the original?

PS: Anyone spot the Battlefield 3 reference?

I like. I like a lot.

I have to say, this version is way better than the original.:twilightsmile: And no, I didn't see any Bf 3 references, which is kind of embarssing since I just played the campaign like a week ago.:twilightblush:

Yes, well written and I'll say its better than your original version. You've completely changed the pace from the original, a slow starting one. This one, action scene and good description for present and past. I'm very suprised that Derpy, Spike (now Icepick? :duck: Now more grown? I can't wait to read why) and Twilight Sparkle, I hope the Jaguars don't trust her at first because was a Celestia's student.

Awesome reboot :pinkiehappy: but sadly your dislike bar isnt gonna change :raritydespair:

And I couldn't see a BF3 reference because I didn't like the campaign :twilightblush: and I can't stop thinking about Transformers: Fall of Cybertron. Its a great game :rainbowkiss:

1185239 The song, "God's Gonna Cut You Down" by Jonny Cash was in BF3 for like fifteen seconds. Rember that part where they were riding in the Bradley?

1185969 Glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

and it's okay, BF3's campaign was horribly written anyway. :raritywink: But if you want to find the reference, simply click on the title right above the closing monologue. And I agree, Fall of Cybertron was EPIC! :rainbowdetermined2:

1185969 Oh, and, believe it or no, "Icepick" is the nickname of the MLP: Vietnam version of Spike. But no, this Icepick isn't that Icepick. This Icepick also has a special magical power that will soon be shown and explained. :twilightsmile:

Why all the dislikes?

1222315 You got me, mabye it was because the original wasn't as good as this... or mabye it was because the original involved ponies slaughtering humans. :twilightsheepish:

Me fuckin' gusta. You sure do know how to lay down a combat scene. I will sit and wait for more.

1251298 Thank you. :twilightsmile: Next chapter on the way.

I enjoyed this.

Love the reboot! Still a few spelling errors but nothing too major.

Slower paced but still plenty of heart pounding action.

And I hope Twilight and Spike are allied to the Jaguars.

Glad to see a new chapter.:pinkiehappy:

Interesting.

Nice incorporation of "Solid Snake Twilight" from the episode "It's About Time".

2498325 ... you really think it's good?

Bleargh ice dragon:twilightangry2: nevermind that good story

Every time I read this, I think of this song

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