After doing much brainstorming, plot planning, and rewriting, this is the final result. I definitely think this is better than the original, and hope you guys like it. Plus, now that I've mostly got the plot figured out, it should hopefully be an open road from here! So, is it better than the original?

PS: Anyone spot the Battlefield 3 reference?

I like. I like a lot.

>>11844651184465 Gracias.

I have to say, this version is way better than the original. And no, I didn't see any Bf 3 references, which is kind of embarssing since I just played the campaign like a week ago.

Yes, well written and I'll say its better than your original version. You've completely changed the pace from the original, a slow starting one. This one, action scene and good description for present and past. I'm very suprised that Derpy, Spike (now Icepick? Now more grown? I can't wait to read why) and Twilight Sparkle, I hope the Jaguars don't trust her at first because was a Celestia's student.

Awesome reboot but sadly your dislike bar isnt gonna change

And I couldn't see a BF3 reference because I didn't like the campaign and I can't stop thinking about Transformers: Fall of Cybertron. Its a great game

>>11852391185239 The song, "God's Gonna Cut You Down" by Jonny Cash was in BF3 for like fifteen seconds. Rember that part where they were riding in the Bradley?

>>11859691185969 Glad you like it.

and it's okay, BF3's campaign was horribly written anyway. But if you want to find the reference, simply click on the title right above the closing monologue. And I agree, Fall of Cybertron was EPIC!

>>11859691185969 Oh, and, believe it or no, "Icepick" is the nickname of the MLP: Vietnam version of Spike. But no, this Icepick isn't that Icepick. This Icepick also has a special magical power that will soon be shown and explained.

w00t! Alive again!

Why all the dislikes?

>>12223151222315 You got me, mabye it was because the original wasn't as good as this... or mabye it was because the original involved ponies slaughtering humans.

Me fuckin' gusta. You sure do know how to lay down a combat scene. I will sit and wait for more.

>>12512981251298 Thank you. Next chapter on the way.

I enjoyed this.

Love the reboot! Still a few spelling errors but nothing too major.

Slower paced but still plenty of heart pounding action.

And I hope Twilight and Spike are allied to the Jaguars.

>>12702071270207 Thanks.

Glad to see a new chapter.

Interesting.

Nice incorporation of "Solid Snake Twilight" from the episode "It's About Time".

Interesting story. It's written well enough, and I'm not sure why it has that many dislikes.

I'm going to favourite for now, and see where it goes.

Well

this is good

good good.

>>17313531731353

M...O...A...R!!!!

>>24983252498325 ... you really think it's good?

>>24985612498561

Yes.