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Carmine

Joined December 2011
302 followers

Stories (3)

  • Scootaloo's Parents
    Scootaloo goes for her weekly meeting with her parents.

    2,502 words · 15,756 views · 785 likes · 47 dislikes
  • Leaving Home
    Shining Armor looks back at his memories before he leaves home.
    2,732 words · 2,040 views · 68 likes · 3 dislikes
  • A Day in the Roots of Fluttertree
    Fluttertree awakes one morning, and waits for the sensual touch of Applejack.
    5,081 words · 3,369 views · 132 likes · 23 dislikes

Blog Posts (104)


Every week, in secrecy, Scootaloo goes to her parent's house. She's afraid of other ponies finding out because her parents are rather... strange. But maybe things aren't as they seem, as her parents are about to tell her something that can turn her entire world upside down...

First Published
2nd May 2012
Last Modified
2nd May 2012

Comments ( 274 )

#1 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

This is the epic resultant of me being bored and somewhat in the mood to write something I wasn't currently working on... yeah, I don't really know either. Hope everypony enjoys this. :pinkiehappy:

#2 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

Read Title.

...

Silly, Scootaloo doesn't had parents.:scootangel:

#3 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

>>534393

Read the story Wilhelm! :ajsmug:

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#4 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

I dooooooooon't

Whaaaaaaaat

#5 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

>>534398

:unsuresweetie:

I am doing.

#6 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

I like it.

It's Trollish, but still adorable and humourous to read. One of the reasons why you make some of the better fics around here Carmine.

:pinkiehappy::ajsmug::rainbowlaugh:

#8 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

Best fanfic trolling evar. :trollestia:

"Bawk!"

#9 · 103w, 16h ago · · ·

>>534412

That pic and this fic get the Scrafty Gusta of Approval

#10 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

You clever bastard!

#12 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

bawk bawk bawk, bawk bawk

#14 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

Bawk bawk bawk

Can't read past that

Laughing too hard

#15 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

wut the  *bu-caw!* did i just read? :derpyderp2:

#16 · 103w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

Cute! wonder who her parents are!

I demand a follow-up! :moustache:

#17 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

That.... was awesome. Thumbs up! :ajsmug:

#18 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

:facehoof:

#19 · 103w, 15h ago · · ·

This needs a second chapter.Or something. It's far too silly to stand alone.

Note that this is a good thing.

#21 · 103w, 14h ago · · ·

wat

#22 · 103w, 14h ago · · ·

OMG.... yes....

#23 · 103w, 14h ago · · ·

dis is gonna be good:coolphoto:

#24 · 103w, 14h ago · · ·

nope i cant read this. i cant believe you would do this to such an inocent and cute little filly. scoots is my fave pony so therefore i just cant read this. i got to the part with her dad first spoke

#25 · 103w, 13h ago · · ·

You, sir, are glorious.

#26 · 103w, 13h ago · · ·

>>534393 that's only because Hasbro has yet to show them or even come up with them. remember when we used to think that Twilight was an only child till this guy came along?

so let's not just assumed Scootaloo's an orphan yet.

#27 · 103w, 13h ago · · ·

>>534831

To be fair, it's not QUITE as bad as you're thinking it is. She's only the adopted child of chickens. Her biological parents are still an unknown.

This sorta thing is why I don't stop reading something halfway unless things like grammar, punctuation, and spelling are bad enough to warrant it :rainbowlaugh:

#28 · 103w, 13h ago · · ·

>>535144

Wait, what do you mean, 'used to'? Is there some reason now to think she's not an only child?

#29 · 103w, 13h ago · · ·

>>535228 well, i assumed that, before Shining Armor even came to exsicence, everyone thought that Twilight was an only child because there wasn't even a brief mention of neither Shining or Candence, and everyone just thought all Twilight grew up with is Celestia, and Twilight's parents. the episode where Twilight talked about when she got her cutie mark had no mention of having siblings. so, eventally, Hasbro offically desided that Twilight has a brother and Celestia has a niece, even though there was no prior mention of such. understand what i mean?:ajsmug:

#30 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

And then Scootaloo wasn't a chicken.

#31 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

Uh :unsuresweetie:

#32 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

At first i was like:applejackconfused: but then i was like :rainbowdetermined2: perhaps instead of finding her parents Scootaloo will find her self just as the same way Applejack did you never know maybe...:heart:

#33 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

WHAT THE-?!

I believe this meme has gone too far now.

Ah, what the hell, I'll track it anyway.

#34 · 103w, 12h ago · · ·

I don't think I could have edited this man...

... You did just fine XD

#35 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

>>535268

What I'm saying is, Shining Armor doesn't count. He's not a real character, he's a plot device shaped like a pony.

#36 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

For the love of God, Carmine, keep this story going! You must show us the secrets of who Scoots' parents are!

I'm betting on Rainbow Dash. :rainbowhuh:

#37 · 103w, 11h ago · · ·

>>535809 he is a real character. a character that came from nowhere, but one noneoftheless. if your a fan or used it just being Twilight as an only child, that's fine, but don't be quick to shun anything new just because of it.

#38 · 103w, 10h ago · · ·

Ugh, I still got soda coming out of my nose from when her dad first spoke. Well played sir, well played.

#39 · 103w, 10h ago · · ·

the reveal at the beginning had me rolling, but i guessed at the adoption thing as soon as he started the "reassuring"  friggin hilarious.:scootangel:

#41 · 103w, 10h ago · · ·

I am so confused and can't stop laughing :rainbowlaugh:

Up-vote and favorite for sure, can't wait to see how this will turn out

#42 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

What the hell did I just read?...

Nah, it's good. Up-vote! :rainbowlaugh:

#43 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

:rainbowhuh: What is this?

Tracking

#44 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

I'll let everypony in on a little secret: most likely, I'm not continuing this story, because I really wrote it as a one-shot! If enough ideas come to my mind though, I may continue it.

#45 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

What is this, I don''t even... :rainbowhuh:

#46 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

Vat a twist!:twistnerd:

#47 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

I can't deal with this man!

#48 · 103w, 9h ago · · ·

That was pretty hilarious, a different take on the "Chicken" joke. :rainbowlaugh:

Kinda reminds me of that scene from Kung Fu Panda 2. Plus I can totally see her doing something like that with the rest of the CMC.

So those this mean the real reason she went into the Everfree with the others was to rescue her foster mother?

#49 · 103w, 8h ago · · ·

>>536602 In the words of Red to his Green partner "You bastard! I'll kill you!!" You must continue!

#50 · 103w, 8h ago · · ·

wow. with the way this story was reading i was almost about to think that fluttershy was into cock [intentionally bad pun] and scootaloo was a pony chicken hybrid

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