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When the TARDIS sends The Doctor to Equestria, it disappears without warning and leaves him there. Now alone and stranded for over a few weeks now, The Doctor spends a few moments reflecting on what has become of his life, what has happened to put him here in this strange new world. Now looking over the town of Ponyville, he wonders what his purpose in this place will be.

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This is, in general, a good self-reflective piece. However, I can't help but think that Ten is being a tad OOC when he's basically telling his life story to Derpy. Usually the Doctor's assistants don't even learn who he is by himself, but by other means before said Doctor would even tell them a FRACTION of what Ten is telling Derpy. :applejackunsure:

Then again, I'm not an expert on the show.

560049 Ah, see, part of that was to people who do not watch the Series. I felt as though it explains the Character of Doctor Who/oves to the reader without having to had watched the show, i get what you mean though. I wanted to include all readers, not just those who watch the show.

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Oh, you have a very, very good point there. I didn't even consider that to be your reasoning.
As a suggestion, maybe you could somehow incorporate that into Ten's mental thinking? Not sure how you would do it though, but food for thought. :unsuresweetie:

560082 Ah, but i felt include most elements from the most recent doctors (9 through 11) hard to tell, with a little bit of research (please read procrastinating on studying for finals and looking up info on Wikis and watching video clips) I felt i did my best

Excellent work. May want to edit your story description though:pinkiehappy:..

560144 Ah, may i inquire why?

Nice! The whole time I was reading this I thought of David Tennant narrating and being the voice of the Doctor. Good read. :twilightsmile:

Absolutely incredible.

560150 Whoops, looks like you fixed them... :applejackconfused:

560244 Right you are! just a quick fix. ^^ thank you for telling me to do such

Fantastic.

When I was a mail mare in Ponyville, I met a stallion on a hill at the end of the day.
He told me fascinating things. His name is the Doctor!
He's from somewhere else,
Hes got a box called the TARDIS thats bigger on the inside and can travel anywhere in time and space!
I ran away with him, and we've been running ever since!:derpytongue2:
*cue Doctor Who intro music*

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Why does this seem like it could be the actual opening to a show? Well BBC & Hasbro you have your clay now mold it you cheap bastards!

562229 My comment is actually just a rewording of the pre-opening credits intro for the current Doctor that is said by Amy Song (the most recent companion).

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Timey wimey my dear friend. Now as the great one himself said. Allons-y!

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Awesome :3

This was great. Made even better that Martha wasn't mentioned at all in the list of companions, to be honest. :raritywink:

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