Vinyl had missed Octavia's new concert and Octavia grew tired of this. It was the last straw and she would not accept any of Vinyl's excuses. But will this be the thing that seals either one of their fate?
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EclipterROME
Yes that is me DJing. Which is what I want to do for the rest of my life. Want to hear a tune? PM me, I will be honored. I also write as a hobby, so that's fun.
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I almost started to cry .I loved your ending to I am Octavia
I dont even know how to put this into words, but all i can really say is that this has to be the best story i have read on fimfiction. good job :)
This truly is amazing. I have read many works and fanfiction of this stature, but this I cannot put into words how great it was. Keep up the good work.
FYI, the tragedy tag implies that the ending will be "bad" no matter what, that despite the best efforts of the protagonist, no matter what they may do, nothing will work out in the end.
I'd suggest a sad tag instead.
5480332 try getting 48 likes in under 24 hours like one of my stories did. or 1k views in under one week. also with that one story
5480368http://www.fimfiction.net/story/238827/princess-luna-is-in-your-bed this is the story i was talking about. ten minutes after it was approved i had 12 readers reading it XD
Thank you for writing this. When I passed by the title, it totally made me remember this song which I haven't heard in years:
You're a good writer as well.
Great story!
Like and fav.
And one little thing:
You mean Octavia, or Octy?
Or is it new nickname?
5480684 I've heard many nicknames before and meant to use Tavi both times. Oops and thanks for liking! if you would like to see more, then follow, I plan to better myself and make ones like this
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One more fix:
There should be "fillies"?
5480827 ill be right on it!
Good job! I think there were a couple of grammatical errors and strange word placements but overall great job. I made a story for the same animation but mine kinda changes things around a little more than yours did, since you did good on this would you mind reviewing mine for me? I've asked people but I think it's a biased decision since they've been by friends for a long time.
Amazing story! I'm literally crying right now.
OH MY GOD! I LOVE IT!!! XD I almost cried too, like everyone else, and smiled happily at the end :3 Awesome "I Am Octavia" ending
Deleted comments are do not being relevant to the story, I will take negative criticism and can assure you none of what was deleted can be considered bad
Read your group-post a few minutes ago, which led me to your profile and of course to your stories.
And what to say - its a good piece of writing you present here. I liked it. I like OctaScratch-stories and this one is a nice take on the theme.
You could have described the falling debris-scene a bit better. Especially Octavias feelings of panic while digging out Vinyl.
But that's just nitpicks.
Overall its a nice oneshot, worth a read.
Have my like and my fav for this one. And a moustache for the unusual idea.
while this was good it felt rushed and over dramatic and i lost a little intrest at the falling debbrie part