Interesting...   I shall keep an eye on this story just to see where it goes, so in the mean time I will withhold my thumb and favorite.

Black Sabbath - Black Sabbath

This is just crazy, it just doesn't make sense... YET

You've piqued my curiosity.  Please continue.

If you ever write anymore i would love to read it....and why does that book contain a copy of deaths list

Moar plz?

Definitely an interesting read so far.

More!!

Because everyone liked it, there's more on the way!

I DECLARE THIS POST, FIRST!!!!!!

Great story though.

Onward sir, onward further into the story.

I like the ghostly allusions and eerie storyline, but Twilights reactions to these occurrences seem less then what is expected. Like she sees Applejacks little sister on a list of death, I think she would freak out a bit more and be extremely inclined to report such discoveries. And she seems to suddenly get distracted by various things, food mostly But again, I love horror/paranormal/evil story elements and the life and death list sold me on this story. very nice work

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A good point you got there, I'll probably edit that a bit later. I'm also new to characterizing her so it's good to hear your thoughts.

its so awesomei must read MOOORRRREEE......crap there is no more

Can't wait to read the next chapter

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nice. I cant wait to read more.......I .......want......MORE........please

The plot thickens to the point of salsa.

Looking forward to the next chapter.