Rainbow Dash discovers that Derpy is being bullied out of her temporary home in Cloudsdale, and decides to help the awkward Pegasus.
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This looks promising. Tracking.
I'm liking this, too. A nice promising plotline with a good dose of friendship between Rainbow Dash and Derpy. I'm keeping an eye on this.
That rhyming title. ..
That alone was enough to interest me, but the story grabbed my attention as well. Favorited and tracked.
Very good starting chapter. I look forward to the friendship between RD and Derpy.
is this going to be romance? I need to ask that befor I read it..
I love romance and I was thinking of making a derpydash fick myself
I'll be keeping my eye on this, looking good so far...
Only problem I see is that Rainbow Dash's house floats just on the outskirts of Ponyville, and is nowhere near Cloudsdale. Might wanna fix that.
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Really? Thanks for telling me. I could fix that without changing the story too much.
this is adorable! Derpy is my favourite pony.
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I'm not planning on romance, but there'll be friendship.
This is looking good! Write on brother!
Liking this already! But who would want to bully Derpy?! </3
I think I'll like this story. Will read it when I can