Ghastly Gorge Productions
proudly presents
Daring Do
And the Wrath of the Elders
Daring Do sends Rainbow Dash an invite, just to cancel the meeting a short time after. But soon Rainbow learns that the handwriting doesen't belong to her hero.
Daring Do in trouble - the wrath of the elders menacing in the dark!
Is it Ahuizotl? The notorious Manefred Pomnel? Or the suspicious Doktor von Marstall?
Anyway with Rainbow Dash and Derpy Hooves the heroic mailmare to the rescue - nothing could go wrong.
Grab your popcorn take a seat and enjoy Daring Do's latest hillarious adventure in cinemascope!
Some notes:
- OC is used, for a variety of characters
- Teen because of language and minor violence
- as I don't want to spoiler here, you'll find further comments in my blog (not yet)
- more infos as needed.
The idea behind this story is, to be a bit like a classical 80' / 90' adventure movie.
For convinience I decided to put the movie-parts in the authors notes.
So if you are here just for the story - ignore the authors notes.
But if you want the full feeling - kick the music in and scroll slowly.
As it is an experiment for me, critique is appreciated.
Definitely promising. You have my interest :)
The story and writing is almost perfect. A few mistakes here and there but nothing distracting. Keep going!
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Thank you.
I write on this and another story . Mostly because working too long on one project kills the creativity for me. I just can't concentrate on one thing only.
So it will go slowly but I try to update regularly.