The peace and harmony of Equestria is shattered when a mysterious foe attacks Canterlot. This evil warlord is able to defeat Princess Celestia and even the Elements of Harmony in one fell swoop, leaving only Luna to escape. With her throne lost and her allies defeated, Luna must find a way to rescue Equestria and her friends.
Cover art is not mine. this is the artiest who made it http://theomegaridley.deviantart.com/art/FoE-Canterlot-398487935
Disclaimer: Written before Season 4, so no tree of harmony
Chapters (7)
Hmm. I'll track for now. I would like to help Luna.
Even if it was written before Season Four, it was posted after. That excuse does not hold up. Add the Alternate Universe tag.
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no need for hostility... sorry
5450573 Riiiight. Don't listen to that guy. No need to add that tag simply because the tree of harmony isn't in there, otherwise every single story on this site would need that tag. Said tag only applies to stories where there are MASSIVE differences, such as other ponies being chosen as the elements or there being a war between factions for Nightmare Moon and Princess Celestia. What I have seen so far denotes it as being a normal version of Equestria.
You seem to have bit of purple prose here and there, but it isn't too extravagant that it's making my eyes melt into a goo of white wax. Secondly, change the color of Landcastra. I know now why the there are so many downvotes despite the excellence of this story. Please. I know you wanted his colors to be like that, but you have to change it or it will cost you dearly.
I can PM you the reasons if need be.
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do so please.
5450803 Also, I insist that you remove the AU tag.
5450808
done... er.. how dose one PM on this site?
5450814 Go on someone's page, look at the nav bar next to the profile pic, then click on 'mail'.