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    • Twilight learns a secret
      Twilight uses her deductive skills to find the truth behind Rainbow Dash's recent behavior.

      1,419 words · 6,533 views · 329 likes · 4 dislikes

    Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash have been hanging out a lot lately.  But that's just because they're such good friends, right?

    First Published
    6th Nov 2011
    Last Modified
    6th Nov 2011

    Comments ( 37 )

    #1 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    D'awwwwwwwwwwww!

    :rainbowkiss::heart::twilightsheepish:

    This story defines the word 'adorkable'!

    #2 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice story, I love the innocent oblivious twilight. There aren't enough fics with her like that. :)

    #3 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    How many Rainbow Dash Shipfics does this make now? Let's see here *gets out abacus*, carry the 2... divide by 3... put that 5 here... AHA, IT'S OVER 9000!!!

    #4 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This was great, but it made me feel so bad for Rainbow! Jeez, Twilight, there's such a thing as being TOO adorkable.

    (I'm lying, there is no such thing):scootangel:

    #5 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Lol'd

    #6 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    D'awwwwwwwwww~

    :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:

    #7 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Good Story!

    #8 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    DAWWWW

    #9 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Adorkable Twilight is best Twilight

    #10 · 84w, 2d ago · · ·
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    i dont think :rainbowkiss: could be any more obvious and :twilightblush: couldn't be any more oblivious.

    #11 · 84w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I have palmed so hard I gave my self a bloody nose. it was so sad, all the effort Dash put in to the months was for almost nothing. this was a different sort and really really sweet good work!

    :twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

    #12 · 80w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So adorably Twilight.

    #13 · 79w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Very nice. (: cute and short.

    #14 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh: this was awesome! Happyyyyyy!

    #15 · 77w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I really don't understand why this fic isn't more popular. It's one of the first fimfics I read and I must've read it a dozen times already!:rainbowhuh:

    Anyway, I had to come back to tell you that I read this when it first came out and loved it! I truly thought it was going to go straight to the top, too bad it's just a hidden gem...:fluttershyouch:

    #16 · 76w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>88976

    Thank you.  I'm didn't write this for e-fame or anything, but it means a lot to know that people enjoyed it.

    #17 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    That was very enjoyable. Adorkable Twiligh is adorkable!

    You have great ideas, do keep writing. :twilightsmile:

    #18 · 75w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This... is.. awesome... sorry there are no other words. Just thank you. Faved

    #19 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Much d'aawwwwwww was had this say.

    #20 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh, that is so completely a Twilight Sparkle thing to do. Bravo!

    #21 · 70w, 5d ago · · ·
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    That is the sweetest most romantic Dash ever.  She is so amaysingly patient with Twilight, and I'm not mad at Twi at all.  She is so cluless, but her sense of friendship is just so great that she would miss the obvious, if it wasn't written in a book for her to read.:heart::lunahappy: I love this kind of stuff. Don't we all wish that out there someone loved us all, even if we ourselves were all clueless too.

    #22 · 67w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Really amazing.

    One of my favorites already :twilightsheepish::rainbowlaugh:

    #23 · 57w, 18h ago · · ·
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    You ever going to continue this story?

    #24 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>594080  No.  I have another story I was working on (which... I should really get back to.  I kind of forgot about it during finals) but I don't have any plans to continue this.

    #25 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>598703

    Ahh bummer:fluttercry:, but oh well your the writer so i guess its your choise.:twilightsheepish: It was a cute story either way.:pinkiehappy:   Can't wait to see what you got coming out next!

    #26 · 51w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i read this:

    http://youtu.be/qjZgOo7LSgA

    #27 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I just read this for what has to be the dozenth time ever since I first discovered this site.

    WHY WASN'T THIS IN MY FAVORITES TILL NOW?!?! :flutterrage:

    #28 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Really one of the cutests ship fics, i´ve read so far. <3

    Over 9000 adorkable and oblivous Twi plus patient and cool RD is best ship. :rainbowdetermined2: :heart: :twilightblush:

    #29 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Just read it for the 5th time.

    I really love reading this every now and then. great story!

    #30 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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    "But – but it had candles and fancy music and waiters with accents and everything!"

    AND FANCY MOUSTACHES

    #31 · 35w, 8h ago · · ·
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    d'AWWWWW :rainbowkiss:

    It's so bucking cute, I can't hold its cuteness :rainbowkiss::rainbowwild: Twilight, you silly filly? How didn't you notice? :pinkiegasp:

    Love it! :twilightsmile:

    #32 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I come back and read this story whenever I need cheering up. Truly fantastic. :rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

    #33 · 24w, 2d ago · · ·
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    D'AAAAAAAAW!:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

    #34 · 20w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Love this one-shot! You should make it into a series.:twilightsmile:

    #35 · 19w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Great story, :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss: TwiDash is the best shiping. :heart:

    #36 · 19w, 14h ago · · ·
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    I'm glad this popped up in my inbox so I could read it all over again. Totally adorable.

    #37 · 16w, 6d ago · · ·
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    D'oh! :facehoof:

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