EDIT: This story is several years old, and was never finished. I do not plan to finish it because it's in an outdated AU. But It came to my attention that I never uploaded the last chapters I had made, and that bothered me. I am rewriting the AU here: Revamped
In the not so distant future, ponies have mistreated the world. One pony alone can't do much to change it, but can dream big. In this story, that pony is GentleSketch, a unicorn colt. His father is a part of the famous Linkin Ponies, who not just go around trying to help ponies, but make music.
GentleSketch still can't use magic, and beats himself up for that reason. He just wants to show his father that hes good for something, while maturing, learning about the world,other ponies and forgiveness. Can he make is father proud, or will he just mess up big time?
Sequel/Spin off of Linkin Pony- Recharge but it is not necessary to read it before. This one introduces itself and is better written.
Rated Teen for some foul language, and some gore later in the story
Fun fact: "Chasing The Sun" is a working title
There are many categories for this story, including sad and comedy, which are conflicting.
This is not the end, this is not the beginning
Just a voice like a riot rocking every revision
But you listen to the tone and the violent rhythm
And though the words sound steady something empty's within them
We say yeah with fists flying up in the air
Like we're holding onto something that's invisible there
'Cause we're living at the mercy of the pain and the fear
Until we get it, forget it, let it all disappear
Sorry, couldn't help myself
. Keep working at it!
*ahem*
CRAWLING IN MY SKIN
THESE WOUNDS, THEY WILL NOT HEAL
FEAR IS HOW I FALL
CONFUSING WHAT IS REAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL
6751090 Do you have anything to actually say about the story or are you just putting lyrics here. 2 comments, and they are lyrics, not anything about the story T.T
Why does GentleSketch look like Littlepip? (That's the pony in the picture, right?)
7768410 WELL Um. Actually I should update the picture. Here's another picture of him (younger) orig05.deviantart.net/8e17/f/2015/255/c/a/marshmallow_in_a_bow_tie_by_kaciekk-d99cqco.png
I guess I could see the relation to LittlePip?? Really, he's just the mixture of his parents. Strangely, this story is quite inspired by Fallout:Equestria, and how I write GentleSketch's thoughts. But I never intended him look like LittlePip.