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VincentKintobor


Aspiring writer, wanting to be noticed by anyone.

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Raiden has fought his whole life. To survive. For revenge. For justice. For duty. No matter how many battles he fights,nothing can prepare him for this mission. Pulled into the Magical Land of Equestria, by the Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle, Raiden is asked to infiltrate the Changling territory, to save Princess Celestia.
However, not everything is as it seems, as Raiden discovers a threat from the distant past, that not only endangers Equestria, but the whole world.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 57 )

Well! that was.....an interesting start. Not sure what to think yet, but looks good.

And in a flash of light, and what sounds like Markiplier saying "Poof!", they were both gone.

:rainbowlaugh: sorry, that's what went through my head as I read it. any time teleporting or something is involved, I hear "poof!" from Markiplier.

Makes sense. tia disappearing from Canterlot would surely be noticed. Same with a badass cyborg ninja, even if he's hiding under a cardboard box at the time.

Sooooo Snowy weather inhibits Raiden's Augmented vision Mode? seems legit. Aside from that, woo! combat!

Man in a red coat? reminds me of Sundowner. No clue, though. Hmm. Maybe Solidus from MGS3?

I thoroughly enjoy MGS. Which is why I was so quick to favourite and read this....and the pacing is a bit fast, but then again, so was Metal Gear Rising. The pacing actually fits the game it's based off of in my opinion.

Just call if you need to save.”

:rainbowlaugh: oh god! I'm reading a video game!

“All right! I’ll go. Take them. I’ll leave in piece!”

Should be peace. nice try, though.

Great so far. can't exactly think of anything else to say......

5500496 Thank you so much for your feedback! Favorites and watches are nice, but comments a what I really enjoy. :D

Hit a bit of a road block with part 6, but I'll get over it, I always do.

I'm glad your enjoying it. And I look forward to Reading what you think of future chapters.

BTW, when I was first brainstorming this story, I had a scene with Fluttershy, befriending Blade Wolf. That would have been a stretch though.

5500440 I'll give you a hint. I'm bringing back an old G1 MLP villain, and re-imagining him in G4. But that's all i'm going to say. ;)

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No prob, dood! I'm....actually a little surprised I'm pretty much the only person who commented on this. and Ironically, am *currently* Blade Wolf.

And a G1 Villian Ya got me, then. FiM is what I'm used to, being 19 :twilightblush:. G1 was way before my time, and I don't really wanna try and find G1 episodes to watch.

5503682 I never saw any episodes ether. I just heard about some of the villains, and went with one. I was scared when I heard a G1 Villain was coming back in Fim season 4. Thank god it was only Tirek, and not......who I picked.

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Wait, tirek is a G1 antagonist? huh. I never knew that.

5505886 Yeah, and Scorpan was his servant that betrayed him, not his brother. Scorpan turned out to be a human prince that Tirek cursed and overthrew. Megan, a human girl, and the ponies she befriended managed to defeat him.

But the Villians back then were pretty threatening. Including a Ram-like demon necromancer.

Don't get me wrong. I'm G4 all the way, but it's good to look back for research purposes. I like to think that G4 takes place many years after G1. Where evolution has changed not only the appearance of Ponies, but how they function as a society. It's like G4 is modern day, 1950's maybe, and G1 is......Stone age.

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That's a really good way to look at things. but.....wasn't there a Pinkie Pie in G1? or am I thinking of a different generation?

5505980 Yes, But this is Pinkie Pie we're talking about. She is everywhere and nowhere. :pinkiecrazy:

5505980 Dude, Season 5 Trailer just came out. Looks awesome. :D

5501907 ahhhh hahahahaaaaa! I know who it is but I'm not saying xD

5751964 Then say it. I'll tell you if your right.

6099006 I'm afraid not. This story was written during Season 4, but that has changed. It now takes place after. Tirek is still locked up.

(Note to self: go back to chapter 1, and change Twilight's tree into a castle.)

Sorry for the long hiatus, real life gets in the way. I promise I'll work on it soon.

Yeah thats still the most stupid gear we get in the game thats not even high tech:facehoof: but all in all great story.

I forgot that Alicorns can sorta age...

6382109 The way I see it. Celestia can't do this forever. Twilight will one day be her replacement.

6406895 She probably has more energy and youth then Celestia, but will most likely retire at the same time. Both will know, Equestria will be in good hooves with Twilight.

At least that's always been my head canon.

But if you don’t want me to do it this way…

Activating cardboard box... :rainbowlaugh:

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Dammit. Missed opportunity for a joke. Then again, this isn't ment to be a comedy.

fuck it, I'm sayin it.

Omg! He's not dead!

“I’ve given you a few spells you can use yourself.”
“I can do magic!?”

Why do i have this feeling that if he goes back to his world Armstrongs getting a LITERAL lightning bolt to the face?

“Absolutely fascinating. I would to do some experiments on you. Magic, science, chemistry, technology. I love learning as much as I can.”

Shouldn't it be 'I would love to do some experiments on you.'?

6489947 Dammit! :( How did I miss that?

So what did you think of Lavan?

Surrounded by 10 metal gears? Pull a cardboard box right out of your ass and ta-da!!! SAFE!!!

Sorry popped in my head about some of the other metal gear solid's.

6625150 I've been working on it, but real life hits hard sometimes. Please be patient. I'll upload a preview of the next chapter soon. Hope that tides you over.

Looks like that idea I gave you months ago paid off and I can't believe Shining Armor and Twlight's friends invented Octo-Camo. By the time Raiden's done with Equestria, the ponies would have reverse-engineered some of the tech from the Metal Gear-verse. Can unicorn horns grow back?

LOVE this story please continue!!

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I don't know LOL. But thank you so much for sticking around for so long. Makes me happy to know you were willing to wait for the new chapter. I promise to work on it more often,

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Oh I plan too. I can't promise when the next chapter will be, but I will be working on it more often.

8224616 Actually, it was more like I forgot that your story existed until it got featured. I don't mind waiting, seeing as life can get in the way. Speaking of life, I should have more time to write because it's summer and all, but I keep forgetting about my fanfics because I'm mostly a part-time fanfic writer and I spend most of my time playing video games.

the oil rig was called The Big Shell
i should know i played the game with subtitles on.

Nice to see this back up and running. And take all of the time that you need, my friend. And I do like how Luna is interacting with Jack.

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I know. Bakki did a great job with it. I just wanted an appropriate cover to my story.

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I know, you know I've been trying to get a cover art for my story but couldn't.

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