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Goodbye, See You Soon...

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Scootaloo is heading out to Cloudsdale with Rainbow Dash for awhile. But before boarding the hot air balloon, she has two important people to say goodbye to.

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Phaedra

Phaedra #1 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

This would have been sad if the execution was a little better. Scootaloo goes to her parents' graves, says, "I'm leaving", and her parents are assumed to respond, "Alright, love you." That's it. No secrets spilled, no conflict between Scoots and her parents (the wind in the trees, or something), nothing else. It seemed short, and while I enjoyed it, it could have been better.

Still, credit where credit is due. For a second fic, this is pretty good.

ShylyGirl

ShylyGirl #2 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · 2 · ·

5414423 Thanks for the feed back, and yes I know it was a bit rushed. The idea just popped in my head and that was about it. But feed back always helps, and maybe today I can make it a bit more interesting! Thank you.

ChaosCretin527

ChaosCretin527 #3 · Jan 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

How did you nearly make me cry? I frickin NEVER cry at fanfics! But, whoa. That was powerful to me in ways you will never understand. In order to keep this appropriate i won't cuss , I'll MLP cuss.

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