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Harmony Split
Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving
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>They keep a relationship full of barriers.
Barriers, that will drive both pegasus over their limits.
they sex while doing sonic rainbooms don't they?....
5419096
Just wait hehe
But as mentioned before, more romantic clop^^
Oh I thought Dash was going to be set on actual fire, but this good too.
This is the first SpitDash that I've read, I think I little bit prefer SoarDash, though. But this one is totally interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Nah
5419451
Glad you like it that far, Even it's just the Prologue
And sorry but I'm Not into Stallions xD
The shadow managed its way through
shadow sighed, slowly opening its suit. A cyan pegasus with a colorful mane made her way out of it, shuddering once her wings were
what you're doing, Spits.” Rainbow then spread her
my job for Celestia's sake
So far it's an alright beginning. Let's see where it goes.
5423909
thanks, corrected it.
As said before, I'm not native-english and such small errors are easily left unseen
Thank you soooo much for writing my request!
5431439
You are welcome
5423909 Actually:
'The shadow managed it’s way through'
'It' is the shadow, therefore implying it means 'the shadow's way through' the ('s) makes it possessive, it is possessing the action of managing a way through. so (it's) is correct.
"shadow sighed, slowly opening it’s suit. A cyan pegasus with a colorful mane made it's way out of it, shuddering once her wings were"
Again, the 's makes it possessive of the suit, and actually, it should have been "shuddering once it's wings were" because it wasn't yet explained who the shadow was. That was my bad.
"what you are doing Spits.”, then spread her"
"you're" is a contraction of "you are", they mean the same thing, one is just shortened. Though I will agree that based on Rainbow's personality, she would have said "you're" and not "you are".
As for the last one, yeah I missed that one. Good eye.^^
5419143 You know, that's actually a fun concept. XP
5451567
Glad you like it
5451554
Um, no. To put it quite bluntly, you're wrong.
"It's" is a contraction for "it is" or "it has".
"Its" is the possessive for "it".
Citation 1 Citation 2.
Now, normally you'd be correct, as the rule for almost all forms of the possessive in the English language is as you describe. "It" is kind of the exception that proves the rule.
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5451761
Okay okay that's enough you two smart-asses^^
I know my english is bad but you two friendly bickering around who's right won't help me
5451786
Eh, don't sweat it. You're falling prey to homophones, a common enough pitfall, even amongst those who do speak the language well. Your grasp of English is better than many here. And you did use the proper form of "who's" in that sentence, so you are doing some things right.
5451761 ...I stand thoroughly corrected. The more you forget from English class, the more you feel like an idiot when someone tells you that you messed up. Thanks for pointing that out so I don't mess up more in the future.^^
5451786 But... But it's so much fuuuuuun. XD
5451973
Continue and I'll let Midnight edit SpitDash...
5452016 0.o Ok, ok! You win!
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hehe as always, good boy
5453655 I'm apparently your pet now? In that case, I expect cookies!
5487246
Cookies, okay
Everything else belongs to my marefriend, sorry
CoughDitzyisnowNocturnalDerpCough
Awwww yayy!! Finally, you updated!
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Chapter two will follow the next days, pinkie promise!
5574905 that's awesome! I kinda agree that Rainbow's quite ooc, but I totally like it! I mean, she's really cute and cherished .
5574989
Look at the Academy episode or at Daring Don't
Rainbow CAN be quite cute and open-minded from time to time.
So maybe a bit ooc, but not too much
Besides, in the story are quite a few spots where she shows her usual attitude.
I would just like to say that Scratch blows my mind with how easily she pumps out chapters and entirely new stories, and I enjoy the hell out of editing them... :)
Great, sweet and beautiful as always.
and maybe a happy ending.
I didn't notice sad tag before, or you just put it lately?
And oh! I hope this story would be that sad
5583072
I added the sad tag in preparation of something that will happen later
And it only took four hours! XD hahaha! Enjoy, fillies and gentlecolts!
Two hours later, and im done can't wait for the next part
Those two have so much love for each other.
So now we have a pair of spurned ponies who might be maliciously inclined towards our lead couple. After all, if they can't have their dreams, why should any pony else?
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It can't be all pure sunshine and this is only the beginning for what I've planned.
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Oh my. This is all going to end in tears and fire, isn't it?
Well, let's hope the way there is quite the trip.
5859119
I won't reveal if there is a happy end or not.
But I can tell you that I have seven more chapters completely planned so far
*see this in tracking stories* Welp...time to read a new chapter in one of my favorite stories
. (Post-Reading) Great Chapter took me awhile to realize how you got Sora. Also I feel sorry for Neon.
5859230
I think he is used to cleaning up after all I said
The formation error in 'Four times the Fun' is fixed. Sorry, my iPad bucked up!
great sex scene, but did i miss the cum inflation?
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Pretty much at the end.
It's not that greatly detailed though
Finally, got around to reading this chapter. Good chapter, not all that in to the sex part but good chapter none the less!
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Next chapter will come around the next days. I hope
It will explain a bit more from the story again
Hmm... talk about unexpected consequences there at the end. It'd certainly prove an unexpected way out of the current set of problems.
Loved it poor rainbow
loved the beginning
Puns, Puns everywhere!!
This was a very good chapter, loved every part of it!!!
Poor Dashie. (We seriously need a Rainbow sad emote)
Can't wait for the next part!