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Foals Errand


Guess whose back?!

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Luna has been home from the moon for six months now. She thought she had most everything figured out, but, when those guards dragged in that large evergreen tree she came to the realization that there is plenty left to learn! Celestia watched as her little sister continued to hide herself with a sigh. Maybe the magic of Hearth warming would help her break through?

Since my normal editor is having some problems I gave him this story off. So thanks to my stand in editors! Adren who did the first half and Spike and Listener who finished it. My thanks and merry Christmas guys!

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This story killed me. Curse you and your cutes :V

That was a cute way to start and end a story. Happy Holidays! :heart:

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Thank you, have a happy holiday as well!

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You know you love em.

Damnit, and I just got back from my last bout with Diabetic ketoacidosis, guess I'd best call a doctor... again...

5417279 Good to know you would've failed the bet even if the picture didn't count. ^^

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Sorry ^^ Glad you enjoyed though!

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He was doomed from the moment the bet was made.

That is so heartwarming. Newly-timeshifted Luna is unspeakably cute.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Nice save Lulu. last minutes gift and didn't have to run all over Canterlot.

Merry Christmas and a Happy Hearth's Warming to you.

Luna's speech is the best part of this story. 8/10

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I was also a sweet hoof made gift rather then just bought.

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Yay Santa approved!

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And to you as well!

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Luna's speech is harder to write then I though! Thank you!

This was just so wonderful, Foals! Thank you, bless you and yours, and may you have a very Merry Christmas. Be strong and be well.

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Thank you! May you have a merry christmas as well!

hi hi

Good stuff, through and through. It kept me guessing, Luna's outside perspective never felt contrived, and there were little things like Luna's poem that were rock solid. Most importantly though, it made me smile. Happy hearth's warming! :twilightsmile:

D'aaaaaaaaw. That was perfect to read here on the 24th. Well done.

Brought a smile to my face

Aww, that picture at the end was so sweet! What a heartwarming story it was! :twilightsmile:

Aw that was beautiful. You write Luna so well... and this felt very real.
Heart(h)warming indeed.
Thanks for sharing!

I can't respond. I have died of teh' cute and diabeetus. :p

Wonderful little tale, Foals.

Cute story! Luna and Celestia dressing up as Hearth's Warming ponies was adorable.

great little story. and who hasn't found themselves doing the same thing Luna did?

I wrote a review of this story here.

The royal "we" is not used when speaking to family members of equal or superior rank.

HNNNGG!!!!!

/falls over

Tis perhaps a bit late to write my review,
but the joy I read brought tears anew,
such is the way for such a happy story,
written in love with all the glory.

Speaks to the heart but even more still.
of dreams we make and yet fulfill,
the Joys of the holiday held in our heart,
with those we love, near or apart.

Great read, I hate myself for taking so long to get around to reading this.

This just made my day

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