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A spell gone wrong leads to a body-switch between Spike and Equestria's main Princess. After the initial shock dies down, Spike may just find himself in a position of too much power, and only time will tell how badly this power will be abused...
Haha nice little story
I enjoyed this immensely, but the point at which Spike initiates his revenge could've been drawn out a little more.
*BELCH*
"Why yes, I've-"
*BELCH*
"Um...Twilight Sparkle, does your assistant-"
*BELCH*
"This is becoming rather worris-"
*BELCH*
"Oh dear. He woul-"
*BELCH*
*BELCH*
"Well," Celestia sighed. "What goes around comes arou-"
*BELCH*
I liked the part best where Spike suffers^^
Not so sure about the knighthood for doing petty vengeance. Kind of sends the wrong message.
I always knew Celestia and Spike have a mother/son connection that runs deeper.
nice story
but
This doesn't really come along with Celestia's character
I give this a favorite of favorites.
I love short, funny, and silly stories like this. Looks like Spike loves that body-swapping spell a bit too much now.
That was Spawesome.
and Here I thought celestia was going to make them com out the other end
Spike, I think you may have takenrevenge on the wrong pony
Ok, wow...I knew more or less where this was going from square one, but MAN that ending!! Seriously, Knighthood and Celestia realizing just what she'd been putting said Dragon through for years. In short, best apology ever...too bad Spike's got his ambition goggles on and looking for lightning to strike twice.
...still...Party Cannon Spike...I like this idea...
QUICK, somepony get on that fic idea NOW!!!
Also, great work!
5353140 *BLEEP* YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sequel to the saga of SPIKE THE BAD*BLEEP* DRAGON!
ABLE TO SUMMON PARTY CANNON!
SONIC RAINBOOMS!
TALK TO ANIMALS!
SUPERSTRENGTH!
SUPERINTELLIGENCE!
ETC.!ETC.!
WHOSE WITH US!
COME ON OVER!
Eh.
Kind of a dick move Spike. But then again, after the incident with Discord, I can't say I blame you.
This was a decent enough story. It was a bit rushed, and I feel as if it could have been better if it was doubled or even tripled in length. +1'd
The moment I read the description and saw the picture... I knew I would gag from all that laughter reading it later. The idea struck me like a lightning bolt x'D
Spike deserved a two part thing -- the knighthood and a severe punishment, kind of like how Queen Victoria knighted the Doctor then banished him.
This would have been perfect if it was drawn out a little more. I would have loved to see exactly what Spike was writing. Perhaps that could come around and bite him again once he's returned as well. There's a lot of potential for awkward comedy.
Body switch would result in death of both beings. You can't copy mind of someone to another brain without killing original.
In the Discord episodes he wasn't well because of magic exhaustion.
5358202 Yeah, that's like a scientific fact, right? ;]
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Short answer: IT"S MAGIC
Of course it doesn't have to conform to known laws of science.
Truly amazing and funny!
The only thing that would have made this better is at the end, Spike, would have stopped mid-sentence and ask, Twilight, why Celestia thought Twilight would think sending letters though him would be cooler!
Great story, all in all!
And that is how you earn a like.
And you have obviously not learned the lesson of BWAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty funny. It was quite enjoyable.
Inexact Spell Twilight Sparkle strikes again.
As Winston Churchill said, "KBO."
Better out than in, I always say. That is a good point, though why did T think it would be cooler?
Not bad, not bad. Pretty funny, even if I sort of knew where it was going.
Could definitely use a clean up in some places, other than that, an enjoyable read.
Spike: Wait, you asked her to send her letters through me just because you thought it looked COOLER?!!!!
Twilight:(meekly) Um...Yes?
Spike: Well, if you think it's so cool, you're going to love this! (breathes in deep)(exhales greatly) *Burns off Twilight's hair*
Spike: Now for the books....
*Twilight runs out of the library with books in her magic grasp screaming*
Twilight: "No, please, spare the books!"
Reading this makes me wish this has to be an episode so celestia and spike can create so much laughs for us.
Now with reading by CaptainSand
5361987 T stands for Twilight, right?
5361230 What does KBO stand for?
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5533721 It means Keep Buggering On. Churchill ended all his phone calls with it during World War II. It basically means do not give up and keep a positive attitude.
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That sounds about right.
This is too hilarious!
Great story!
LOL LOVE IT have you thought of doing a sequel were maybe Twilight found a rare gem called the moon's star gem or something to do with the night and she was planing to do some test on the gem but then pinkie pie pop out of nowhere and it scared twilight so much that she used that spell again but this timed instead of Spike and Celestia it is Twilight and Luna and that happened because that gem in somewhat linked to Luna. you don't have to do it if you don't want to but i would like to know what you think of it and i hope you have a good day
Fun little story, but, even if it is exaggerating for comedy, I think it is a bit much to have it literally be torture. Immense and unrelenting discomfort is bad enough for the purposes of this story. It becomes a little distasteful as it is. In my opinion. It goes too far over the line from comedic payback to unpleasant jerkishness.
Still, not a bad read. Just too much in.
I don't blame spike for doing it
Re-read. Nicely done!
I think the previous version worked better. :/
Man, Spike can be a real jerk sometimes.
As a sequel I would have spike bagging Celestia to switch him with twilight and then send letters through dragon mail as a revenge. And then spike realizes as a pony he can't eat gems. Spike and twilight get their revenge at each other at the same time and Luna stops THE stupidness by doing something a ruler would do.
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And I liked the part were you choked to unconsciousness because you sucked Tirek's dick.
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And I liked the part where you realised this comment is gay as fuck and totally unnecessary.
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one year lay-ter