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*Something profound.*

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Name's Ulysses. Courier. I've done much as I've walked my road, seen many lands, crossed roads with many people, traded both bullet and philosophy alike with many more. I have followed many symbols. I've carried messages, I have learned the meaning of many more. All of this, this road I've walked, to find a nation, a history and a symbol, I could believe in. Roads have taken me far, but I always thought that you could walk no further than the end of your road. History taught me otherwise. Message in that; never underestimate the Old World, and the gifts -and curses- the land can hide. Found a new road now...not quite as lonely as the last...

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Comments ( 30 )

Ulysses? This aught to be interesting...

Thing one, it's spelled manticore not manticor.

Thing two.

so the palace was still pretty empty beyond herself and Spike, asides the occasional guard that is.

That should either be 'aside from' or 'besides'

Thing three.

"You're…not from around her…are you?" Ulysses shook his head.

Last I checked 'her' wasn't a place.

Thing four.

"Long story, no time to tell my history. To exposed out here,

Need another 'o' on that too.

Thing five.
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A fallout crossogre with my second favorite character (Dean Domino FTW) i always like the message of lonesome road, now i'll follow this intently.

Interesting and oh also a typo.
Its suppose to be Shaman, not Sharman. You really need an editor mate.

You know what, I like this, even if I did not read this all the way.

If this story can be given support it would be a great story! Not just because its the only story I found with Ulysses...

But hey you keep on working and this story will become something.

Other than a few typos (concurrer instead of conqueror) this is quite well written. Some very overused tropes, of course.

I like it quite a bit. Might want to work on the punctuation, though.

Oh I like this story so far. However one suggestion; Ulysses in the story speaks in broken phrases, he doesn't speak like that exclusively you know. Just thought I'd put that out there

Great story thus far, but there is still a LOT of glaring grammatical errors.

5347409 sorry but you are not one to speak, it is there are not there is.

5360935 Both are grammatically correct representations of present tense. Go read a dictionary.

5361476 Yes but it would be good to note that is, is the singular and are is the plural. It would also be appreciated if you would refrain from snide comments and insults.

You write Ulysses quite well!

So much for friendliness eh Twilight?

Ponies Y U make Ass of U and Me!

Yay second chapter. Yay good chapter. Can't wait for the third one:pinkiehappy:

Honestly, this is the biggest cliche In crossover fanfics that I see. One of the Mane 6 walks out of the Everfree with a strange creature with no signs of hostility, other five pick up the idiot ball and assume said creature is hostile.

Oddly enough, I never see it happen when pinkie is first contact.

I do wonder what would happen if Benny, Legate lanius or another memorable character comes to equestria......IDEA!

Really? Your doing the 'misunderstanding-for-drama' trope. Just... no.

As Cloverleaf's said: "this is the biggest cliche In crossovers," and I agree.

You've got Ulysses' speech patterns amazingly correct. I find him to be like Zecora and a massive b!tch to get correct.

Aside from the few mistakes, It's a great story

This is pretty good. I've yet to find a decent story with Ulysses as a protagonist. The writing is good, for the most part, except some grammatical errors.
Will you be continuing this story?

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Taking a look at all the dates and times on these comments, I don't think this story is going to be updated.
Shame. This story would be amazing if it ever continued.
I'd suggest adding this to your "watch" list, just on the off chance that the story does update.

Next chapter? Cuz its good!

RIP story. Loved fallout new vegas, so I am sad to see yet another one of these stories abandoned.

Will you ever continue this

It had potential but now it's history has died

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