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Literation, Alteration, and Alliteration

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After Twilight got accepted as Princess Celestia's pupil, she feared for the time when she would leave her home and live in the castle. There was only one last vacation remaining with her family before she would start her studies.

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I like to thank the Fimfiction chat and especially Artimae for some helpful pointers in creating this story.

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Choral Note

Choral Note #1 · Dec 3rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

But spike didn’t

Spike should be capitalized.
Anyway, this is adorable. Little Twilight is characterized perfectly. Upvote!

Fantapull

Fantapull #2 · Dec 3rd, 2014 · · ·

5342264
Thank you very much.
I changed it.

Choral Note

Choral Note #3 · Dec 3rd, 2014 · · ·

5342273

FortuneWriter

FortuneWriter #4 · Dec 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Daw.

TheMessenger

TheMessenger #5 · Dec 4th, 2014 · · ·

A great start. I'm looking forward to more.

Jman14102

Jman14102 #6 · Dec 4th, 2014 · · ·

Daaaaaaw.

GeneralLiberator

GeneralLiberator #7 · Dec 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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So far so good.
Excellent work, Commander.
Remember...
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Swashbucklist

Swashbucklist #8 · Dec 6th, 2014 · · ·

Always a nice treat to come across some Tiny Twi and Spike Tyke cuteness. Problem is, it's divided into two segments. The first is the only one I care about (young Spike and Twilight being adorable), and the second is about Twilight's impending homesickness.

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