A guy buys a replica of the Pon drum from patapon on Etsy, and is sent to Equestria as the great Patapon. He then plants Mater, the Patapon tree of life, and brings the Patapon tribe to the new land. Now it is time for the Patapons to march!
A Displaced fic. Tags and characters will be added as I go on. Rated T just in case. I do not own Patapon or MLP. Also, thanks to 'DIE: Dwarf In Equestria' for the title idea.
2/1/2015 4:10 PM: Wait...... I was FEATURED!?!?! How did that happen! Thank all you readers for helping me get here! This really means a lot to me! Now, I'm going to go party! (March 26th and another feature! Thank you so very much!) (Another feature as of April 18, 2015! Thanks so much!) (Okay, I'm going to stop tracking when I got featured, but thank you all so much!.)
Off the bat, I like the title.
"Because your stronger. You are the flag bearer, after all."
"Because you're stronger. You are the flag bearer, after all."
"Because your stronger. You are the flag bearer, after all." Hatapon grumbled as he started digging the hole. Meden, on the other hand, started humming tunelessly as she started making a hat. The hat was finished way before the hole, so I said,
"Meden, go help Hatapon. It will get things done faster." Meden's expression soured as she walked over to Hatapon. Hatapon looked triumphant at this, and was much happier as Meden joined him. It still took a while. I was grateful for the fact that Mater gave off a ghostly glow that illuminated the area. They were done at about an hour after Meden joined in. They shoved the materials in the hole, and covered it again. Soon, Mater shone, and the first Yaripon was born.
"Because your stronger. You are the flag bearer, after all." Hatapon grumbled as he started digging the hole. Meden, on the other hand, started humming tunelessly as she started making a hat.
The hat was finished way before the hole, so I said, "Meden, go help Hatapon. It will get things done faster." Meden's expression soured as she walked over to Hatapon. Hatapon looked triumphant at this, and was much happier as Meden joined him. It still took a while. I was grateful for the fact that Mater gave off a ghostly glow that illuminated the area. They were done at about an hour after Meden joined in. They shoved the materials in the hole, and covered it again. Soon, Mater shone, and the first Yaripon was born.
It sounded like,
It sounded like-
The Yaripon jumped up, exited.
The Yaripon jumped up, excited.
They stopped, apparently realizing that running wouldn't do any good against Yaripon's spear. The white one with the rainbowish mane stepped forward in front of her blue sister, saying,
"Hail, I am Princess Celestia. And this is my sister, Princess Luna. We are grateful for the help that you gave us with that timber wolf." I floated forward, startling them, and said,
"I am Kami, God of the Patapon tribe. I'm happy to help, but what are two Princesses doing out here?" They seemed shaken for some reason, I don't know if it was because of my god status or for some other reason. Luna shied behind her sister as Celestia said,
"We were driven from our home by the spirit of chaos, Discord. But may I ask why a god is speaking to us?" I replied,
"Because my tribe is still weak. And they don't know how to deal with strangers." She looked unsatisfied with this answer, but let it drop.
They stopped, apparently realizing that running wouldn't do any good against Yaripon's spear. The white one with the rainbowish mane stepped forward in front of her blue sister, saying,"Hail, I am Princess Celestia. And this is my sister, Princess Luna. We are grateful for the help that you gave us with that timber wolf."
I floated forward, startling them, and said,"I am Kami, God of the Patapon tribe. I'm happy to help, but what are two Princesses doing out here?" They seemed shaken for some reason, I don't know if it was because of my god status or for some other reason.
Luna shied behind her sister as Celestia said,"We were driven from our home by the spirit of chaos, Discord. But may I ask why a god is speaking to us?"
I replied, "Because my tribe is still weak. And they don't know how to deal with strangers." She looked unsatisfied with this answer, but let it drop.
(Really, if you have text describing that someone is saying something, you need to have what they're saying in the same paragraph. The comma and then the line break is sloppy, and feels jarring.)
5428914 Right, I think that's all sorted. Thanks!
I....have been waiting for a fanfiction about one of the best game seires and you have my attencion for this
5431104 Your welcome! I happened to be replaying number 2, and this just sorta happened.
5431120 Finally one of my favorite games of all time has a story that is very good and well updated
5431345 I plan to update this often, but things may happen. Over all, I'll do my best but no promises.
5431499 yay
*cough*
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You sir, if you do not till me how you were able to get this game i shall hunt you down and kill you for the honor of the patapons
5433531 It's just a photo.
What..?
5436583 What what?
5436658
What in the name of Shrek is a 'Patapon'?
5434282
Expect Your murder to be some time next week, now if you will excuse me I must go and kill those guys that disliked this story
5436682
This is the most entertaining game that you could play in your life
Suggestions eh? If you have trouble with where to go, I would suggest adding an opposition, other than Discord and his forces.
Another Displaced, perhaps? One who is also building an army to conquer these new land? I would suggest Chimera from Resistance or perhaps Bowser from Super Mario?
If not, I would like to see Celestia and Luna's history, early life with cute/happy/scary moments added, ending with Discords attack.
Great potential of a story you got! I'll keep an eye on it and my ears tuned to the sound of the drums.
wait a tree? OH GOD its the harmony tree so does that mean there might be a battle between celestia and luna about the patapons with her becoming nightmare moon?
5460369 The first suggestion, I tried that last time. I regretted it. I might be able to pull this time, but I don't want to risk it. Your second though, that will work wonderfully. Thanks for that. And hopefuly, drums will sound soon.
5461155 your getting close, but no ciggar.
5464438 are you going to include the patapons rivals zigapon or something like that
5464733 I'm still thinking about that.
5464888 Mayhaps Discord tries to fight fire with fire?
5464925 that is a good idea he would see what the patapons are like with out there god and drums
5464925
Ohhhh, I like this.
5465529 Oh well, whatever you decide upon, I hope General Gong is there!
5465648 No comment.
Awww, why isn't there more chapters? What about the chibi army?
5484205 I'm trying to get another done by Saturday.
5484481
oh, cool. I thought you were huitus. Couldn't tell, using smart phone.
Yeah, Celestia is kind of a jerk in this chapter but I understand where's she's coming from.
It's not that she's wrong, it's that she hasn't experienced a lot of the world yet.
Pom Pom patta pom patta patta patta pom
5498334 Yah, thats what I was going for.
5498398 Chika Chika pata pon! Don don Chika chika!
5498452 I've already dropped a few hints. Let's see if you can figure it out.
5499839
Hurray for believable extremists!
5502601 Oh, you said what TYPE. I meant who it will be. Sorry about that. I also suppose that I will need to come up with new types based on the hero... But still, sorry about that.
Ooh, new chapter!
Quick question before reading.
Does it have the Uberheroes from Patapon 3?
5576805 It will, but just not yet.
Oh no! Evil Celestia!....maybe....
5576905 Well, Harmony Celestia. Not evil, but it can and will be viewed in different ways. For instance, being Harmonized make's it so that you lose a portion of your free will. Not all of it. You can still do coke or pepsi, but things like 'should I kill myself?' are off the table. That makes it so that Harmony can be seen from many perspectives.
but the patapon's are not Evil that would mean saying the griffins were Evil but they eat meat to ya know. i mean they love the drums and making music but that is all i can think that they do sometimes.
full harmonized Celly welly? thats fucked up I liked
5578230 Well, the Patapon tribe can be seen as warmongers, so Harmony would want them gone.
5579255 I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Hm, well it certainly upped the ante, which 2 forces against our plucky hero and his minions.
Now the question with Harmony is why It want the Patapons gone:
Is it due to the fact that they will destroy all who oppose them in their futile search for Earthend?
Or is it that Earthend Does exist and Harmony knows where it is and fears anything looking for it and the consequences that would follow?
And then there's your version of Discord. Can't say I enjoy the omniscient take on him, as him being unaware with things outside his perspective and having to 'think outside the circle' when he isn't right is more humbling for the character. But this is just a small complaint to an otherwise good addition to the story.
5580179 Yah, looking back on my dipiction of discord he DOES seem a little OP in that regard. But he can only pay attenchon to one being at a time, and he needs to look for something to find it. Those are two big weaknesses in his powers. Otherwise, I'm glad your enjoying it! And to your question about Harmony, both.
Fuck celestia she will never understan
To me harmony is and. Discord re a lie in both because ponies cant do both
5584773 Ummm, could you please make your comment clearer? I can't understand what your saying.