After recovering from a perilous fall off of a building, a stallion is reunited with his best friend from his foalhood.
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An idea that had been biting away at my soul for too long to not write a story about it.
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This story... Damn... It's like White Box... It really makes you think...
518526 Yeah, but I deleted it, you can have it back.
518557 thank you kind sir.
I figured our Bentley wasn't real when Clack said he brought him happiness. I like these kind of stories, especially when you can figure out what is going on without having to read it three times.
518818 thanks, if there's anything you feel that would make it better just say so, constructive criticism always helps
518617 I figured it out when he was talking to the pony at the apple stand.
I likey.
great as usual, now excuse me while i sing.
People let me tell you about my best friend.
Good concept. Seen it before but still a classic. Only issue is that I felt like I was literally reading text as opposed to experiencing a story. The pacing was a bit too fast, the nature of Bentley was a bit too obvious, and there was too much exposition. Fun concept fic though.