For the new year, I'm starting over. Used to be ~Acoustic-Pegasus~ I write stories and think I'm an author.
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One day, while Cadance is foalsitting Twilight Sparkle, she gets a wonderful idea. She gets to work on making a present for the greatest filly in all the history of fillies.
Just a short little story inspired by the cover picture ^^
Image from deviantArt, by the user SpyrotheFox. Used with permission. Thanks again ^^
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Dawwwwwwww :D
Short, sweet, and cute!
Very well written, and sweet, I'd bet this gets featured.
Very nice!
Reading this felt like a life-time of diabetes *-* My blood is 100% sugar now.
519212 in which case you'd have maple syrup for blood
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Short and sweet.
My cat just scratched me and I bled maple syrup. It was delicious.
This was so cute!
Nice, short, and sweet story.
The Cadence x Twilight interactions were pretty good. However, I found SA entering Cadence's thoughts both jarring and unnecessary. It didn't really flow well (there was nothing leading up to SA entering her thoughts), and it was hardly a needed component to this Twilight x Cadence centred short.
HNNNNNNNNNGGGGG
That feel.
OH MY GOSH. THAT WAS SO CUTE
! Let Celestia see it... 
so thats were the doll came from
Loved it
1 typo, twilight ran into the kitchen, and bummed into the kitchen.
Shouldn't it be table :3
Mother of god... I never knew my blood was made of maple syrup until now!
Bawwwwwwww!
Whoa twilight, if you eat all those cookies you're gonna get a wicked bad tummy ache.
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yeah, I can understand that... sorry for the unnecessary information
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'tis fixed! thanks for noticing
HNNNGGGG its strange but i know what it is like my 4 year old cousin looks up to me like a big brother and she is always happy to see me and now that i think of it i think of her as a little sister the relationship i share with her is similar to twilights with cadence
I registered there just to say that this story is super nice and cute, and I really enjoyed it while I was reading! Awesome work!
D'awwwwwwww...
If only this was long enough, it could have gotten on EQD :/
Ah well, I loved this so much I had to read it again :D
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thank you, but I personally don't see how it could be any longer, without dragging the story out and making it boring
but again, thank you 
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Oh i know, I'm not asking you to make it longer, just it's a shame EQD doesn't accept short stories.
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yes, it is a shame, because I believe some of the best stories can be hidden in short stories. For example, a one-word story that everyone can relate to: life.
549162
I see what u did thar.
That should be on here!
Lol, so anyway love this story (for the 3rd time)
549193
haha thank you
Awwww, that's so cute!
HNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGG. I never understood when people said they got diabetes from a fanfic. Now I get it.
pure d'awwwwwww!
thank you everyone for all the nice comments
It really means a lot 
greatest sister relationship ever
And that's how Smarty Pants is made!
Aww the sweetest story ever! Definitely a thumbs up