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All is peaceful in the thriving town of Briarwood, home of the Mystic Force Power Rangers and the newest gateway between the human world and the mystic world. It's been one full year since the defeat of the menacing Octomus, and the citizens of Briarwood prepare for the anniversary, but an old foe unexpectedly rises from the grave and teams up with an inter dimensional partner in crime. The reunited Power Rangers must travel to the lands of Equestria in order to defeat their old foe, and there, they might meet some very confused Elements of Harmony ready to battle an old foe of theirs as well. Together, they must defend their homelands and combine their magical forces in order to stop their pasts from catching up from them, but is it to late? Find out in the chapters below!

Crossover between My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and Power Rangers Mystic Force.
Romance Tag used very subtly; there will definitely be no non-cannon shipping going on.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 26 )

YES!:raritystarry:Fanaly! A mystic force Crossover.:raritystarry:

Interesting so far, but there's an error you'll want to edit.

“Yeah, and I’ve been helping him out as employee of the year,” Nick said happily, “We’ve been so successful with sales that Toby is considering opening up more branches outside of town!”

That should be "Chip" in this spot.

There are some things you may want to edit. There are a couple of times where you spell morlock wrong.

“Quiet, murlock!”

“Isn’t it obvious? Murlocks, attack!”

“I don’t think so,” Morticon wasted no time in dispelling a holding spell, stopping their morph and halting them in their place. Dark magic grasped at their bodies, and they fell to the ground in pain, dropping their morphers and wands, which were grabbed by the Hidiacs and brought to Morticon’s side.

I would recommend changing that to either "enacting" or casting, since "dispelling" usually implies getting rid of something.

Then, the screams arose in town.

And I suggest deleting that.

Looks like u caught my attention with this crossover of Mystic Force. I hope to read more.:twilightsmile:

R u going to do more of this story? Cause I would like to read it more.

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Yes, I will continue to work on this story. It's just that things are going on in my life and my free time is sparse right now. The next chapter is actually ready to go, but I want to make sure I have a head start with the later chapters before I start posting again.

5658859 Cool and by the way, I'm a fan of the Mystic Force.

Out of all of the power ranger series Mystic force is my top five favorite show ever

Knowing Pinkie she might make a welcome/thank you for saving us(or something she'll write down) party for the ranger.:pinkiehappy:

“This is going to be another one of those days, isn’t it?”

:rainbowlaugh:

Got it in one Xander, I am loving this story so far.

I could edit for you if you want, I found a couple of things that you may want to fix.

“But they’re still too busy with their own mission to help us.”

That should probably be "missions".

And the first creature, wearing his red vest and cape, lunged through more foes, trying to get closer to scary bull creature named Morticon, but was shot down by dark magic.

I suggest putting "the" between those two.

5658876 will brightstar and/or catastros play a part since they are kinda pony related?? And what about fireheart? Of course it has been a while since i seen the series so if something happened to them it's likely that i forgot.

next chapter please and update the story

Comment posted by PhantomSage21098 deleted May 1st, 2015

does anyone think someone should make a fic about the Zeo Rangers? Anyone?

5658859 more you beautiful bastard

Sweet a preety good fic on my fav ranger team. They're my fav because and this is going to sound stupid but because their theme song is the best ever

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Third fav team. Beat only by Jungle Fury and Dino Thunder

Comment posted by TheHardie-Boy deleted Feb 19th, 2019

Dude, you really gotta update this. Don’t leave us hanging, you set this up so well.

5658876
Buddy, please update the story.

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