Lol, the ending had me in hysterics.

Nice... I love this..

Dragon Grade Laxatives, a stuff of legend

By the way, enjoy your new home in the sun

Oh my god...that was hilarious!

Please do more!...oh and RIP TicTac...have fun on the sun!

That was great, very comedic stuff there. Aside from the obvious Guard and his laxatives, I think the part about damage to the castle with the punch line of: "especially when you've each gone out and hired several mercenaries. to do actual battling." was one of the best. Speaking of, looks like there's a period instead of a comma there.

I'll be looking forward to the rest of the complaint files you bring up here.

i see the sun tyrant wishes to kill a fellow prankster! good luck getting past me little tia

Multiple small grammar errors which deeply offend my inner Grammar Nazi.

Meh, don't care, laughed hard.

>>513503513503

Meh I wrote 50% of it on my Ipod

so only have of those mistakes should offend you.

I loved please do more

I enjoyed this quite a lot, I hope there are many many more

"You have 3 minutes to find a bathroom.

Good Luck"

Did Celestia just troll herself via memory wipe? How often does she do this? Won't constantly brain-bleaching herself give her brain cancer? I know she's immortal, but the migraines must be a livin' hell!

>>513553513553Seconded. And get an editor!

This is great. TicTac's legend lives on

>>513508513508 I hope you have plenty of Industrial-Strength Sunscreen, I hear that sunburn can be brutal!

Wait, "over three thirds of the library (Twice)"?!? Only the god of Chaos could do that, but it says that it was between sisters...

>>513813513813

BookForts

are serious business

This is hilarious.

this looks like it's going to be fun.

i don't suppose you will be taking complaints as well?

>>516535516535

What da ya mean?

just that if you were to write more of these would you consider taking some written by others to use in your story. ether as filler for a quick joke or however else.

X-LAX win.   Don't take my stuff bro!

More like this

nooooo not tictac! he...it...was so young!!!

wat

>>536438536438

<Shrugs

>>536457536457

So...you're a non-evil changeling?

Do you know a gal named 'Mirror Match'?

And... uh... wat

If you are truly a changeling, from who did you get your love-food?

>>536464536464

Nope, who be this

>>536464536464

From you guys

Hey TicTac, I found the donuts you where looking for-what?.....

Princess? Why are you teabagging that changling?

>>536674536674

She was the one who imitated pinkie pie before getting a face full of Twi-Gun.  last I saw her she was in Fluttershy's cottage with a broken leg and a busted horn.

[OOC: referring to the utterly adorable MC of 'Smoke and Mirrors'.]

Tictac?!

Noooooooooooooooooo!

Aww.... poor Tictac.

Wait... Changeling... Zerg...

*has made the connection*

Awaken my Child, and embrace the glory that is your birthright. Know that I am the Overmind: The eternal will of the Swarm, and that you have been created to serve me.

This installment was a little rushed and it showed in some places where your sentences/thoughts became disjointed. That, combined with how short it was, proved to be a bit of a let down. Otherwise, what you did have here was along the lines of the same enjoyable humor, just less polished.

>>536851536851

All typed from my Ipod, sorry about that.

It was more or less filler till I can manage to actually write something out.

Star craft FTW

Princesses Luna and Celestia need to merge to form an Archon now. POWER OVERWHELMING!!

>> Royal Guard Tictac have i ever mentioned that i love you

this is a really good fic. i don't understand why you discontinued it>>536870536870

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>>536752536752 Well, we're right proper fucked now, aren't we?

I forgot. Why did you stop writing this? It was pretty good.