Knocking a pony out cold with a door? Unusual, but it happens. Finding out that said pony was on an extremely important mission, on which the very fate of Equestria itself may hang? Far less normal. Having to then do said mission? Welcome to Octavia's life.
This story has definitely caught my attention. I like the concept, and it's well written out too. There was just a few little things like
I think that was supposed to have another quotation mark after the first comma. Definitely excited to see more
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Little bit of a late reply, but that wouldn't stop the King of Heroes, nor would it stop me!
Thank you! Seeing a comment like this makes me happy! I fixed that error you pointed out, by the way, so thanks for that!
And a new chapter is on the way soon!
You have my attention