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FluffyDoom


I have the best puppy-dog face ever. It will make you cry.

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Spike is all alone in Ponyville. He has friends, a family, and a loving society around him, so how can he not be lonely? What he doesn't have around him, what he once craved during a foolish quest to find himself, is dragons. Spike’s egg was found abandoned in the forest, timber wolves were about to eat him. If it weren't for Celestia he would have been a goner, even if no pony, except for one with awesome powers, could hatch him.

As he verges on becoming a teenager, a miracle seems to happen for him. The most beautiful creature falls, no, crashes from the sky, landing near him. At first this creature is cursing at him and calling him names, but natural curiosity and joy overlook those brief moments, besides, she is obviously in pain as he drags her to safety.
The gorgeous creature he aims to heal with the help of ponies is a dragoness, only two years younger than him. The first week she stays there, she is in a magic-induced coma for head trauma, but when she is awaken and sees Spike not only helping ponies, but holding her back.....

Well, slight trouble arises, but surely this manly dragon can take the beatings his new dragoness friend wishes to deal out?


*Squeals in utter joy* Popular stories? For me, this is big. Thankyou! Everyone! as of 11/25/14

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 42 )

It has much potential I hope to read a great story, keep up they good work and I will be in touch.

Am I the only one who wants the dragoness dead?
It's a nice story and all, but seriously. KILL HER.
KILL HER UNTIL SHE DIES FROM IT.
Not because she's an OC, just because she's a really mean character. Her pride is astounding, almost as much as her stupidity.
For an OC, she seems well balanced. I congratulate you, dear sir/madam, for making an OC that's so hate-able without meaning to be lovable!

5311798 Her purpose is to be a dragon, so thank you XD.

From what any person has been able to gather, dragons hate ponies, with the exception of Spike because he was raised as one! Teenage dragons are crude and probably cuss a lot, and want to seem as strong as possible. Dragons, with the exception of Spike again, are not cuddly and lovable. So the fact that I was able to portray this makes me super happy.:yay:

Also, wouldn't you be a bit cranky if you were in horrible pain? ;3. That lady isn't a complete meany.

5312046 Well... I might be mad if I crash-landed and came face-to-face with a sheltered sissy of a dragon, yes. :moustache:

I can see the dragoness telling Spike, "You love your food?""Quit playing with your food!"


"She's not my diner , She's Rarity!":moustache:

"And I'm an Oat Burger":facehoof:
"I'm Spikey wikeys Marsh mellow Sweetie pie":duck:

Not bad...not bad at all......now give me more! :moustache:

Not a bad start. Can't wait to see how this develops.

5312185 However this chapter does her hardly any good XD. You see her being somewhat nice at the very end...

A Spike shipping with another dragon? :pinkiegasp: Count me interested!

Okay, I have mixed feelings about all the multiplication. Though I'm curious about where this goes.

5317333 Plot twist, she's a wyvern.

Does anyone else thinking that the princess are acting a little evil here?

5317476 What, them? The immortal rulers? They have no flaws. :scootangel:

Aw, I can't like it again. :fluttercry:
For this having a romance tag, along with my utter disgust towards anything of that type, I certainly am enjoying this story! Probably because the closest thing to romance so far is Spike's daydreaming.

5318008 One of the episodes when Rarity gets kidnapped by Diamond Dogs Spikes thinks of himself as a noble knight, I am kinda playing off of that in this story XD.

5317368 Oh my god! You don't know what a plot twists is

5322483 I was joking :L

You don't seriously think I would reveal huge plot twists in the comments, do ya? :pinkiehappy:

5322944 Oh, well, if that is the case, then Twilight and Blazer totally hook up. Spike and Rarity hook up, and Sweetie Belle goes on a mass murdering spree.

5323708 I'll might read that just to see how far sweetie gets, but I might not because you shipped Spike and Rarity.

Twilight(Cries)

You're learning so much.

I remember when you were just a small easily manipulated filly. Now look at you!

(Sobs)

You've made me so proud!

Formatting's a little odd this chapter. Why's everything centered? Also, spaces between paragraphs would help.

5331067 Oops, sometimes that happens when uploading from google docs, and I got distracted after I uploaded so I didn't check. Thank you for noticing that, lemme fix it.

I'm guessing you left one of the center brackets open. Common mistake. What isn't, is not spacing paragraphs.

He's MINE !:raritycry:

Oh Oh:twilightoops:

:moustache: Who?

:derpytongue2: More !

5331998 Ack, something must have fudged up :applecry:

If Blazer was voiced, what would she sound like?

5428112 Slightly high-pitched, yet gruff. Tomboyish too. A slight brr in her voice (brr as in a kind of growl like sound, or harsh sound).

I don't really get this story first she was forced to stay there and now she's mostly complying with being treated like an pet/experiment then just flips out for no reason. Its starting to feel like a chore to read this.

Man Spike is disrespected in this story. :unsuresweetie:

5530793 Yeah, I plan on hopefully smoothing things out x.x Sorry about the shitty reads so far. I promise it stabilizes after this.

5533008 alright don't get me wrong I'm definitely gonna keep reading this but I don't like how dragons are basically treated worse then pets and spike just goes along with it (mostly bias on my part because I like a badass stands up for himself instead of a pushover spike) I'll definitely keep reading but hate the personality of my fav character :moustache:

5533046 At the moment he is being doepy for his second, "one true love". You can bet he is gonna snap sooner or later :raritywink:

I want to see if I can ease her into pony lifestyle quickly

Oh yes, because a dragon's way of living is different and bad but a pony's way of life is far superior to sub lifeforms

5555654 Twilight doesn't have much experience with dragons. :twilightsheepish:

Also in my story, the outlook for dragons is, they are extremely rude to those outside there species, not very hygienic, and... Ah, lemme just type further into the chapters. Things shall be explained.

I like what you have done so far and I look forward to seeing where you go with it there there is not enough good stories That are spike central with other dragon's

:applecry:Rest in peace :fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry:

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