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Hi my name is Soul.
Don't ask about my name.
Anyway, let's get to the point. I saved Celestia and she wanted to thank me in return. Without my permission of course.
This lead to scare her ponies... This led to a lie, that I didn't liked.
They calmed down after hearing it. Because why would Celestia pet hurt them?
I don't know how long I can keep this up.
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You know, this is one of the only stories I've read that I can't finish. Not because it has bad grammar, as is usually the case, but because I don't know what the heck is going on. I'll keep an eye on it, but no like just yet.
ur human n u lol xd xxp
Prepare for a review.
Worst. Description. Ever.
Hm, this, looks good. Even though it is mostly disliked. But then again, people have their choices.
I like it. Hilarious how Celestia uses him as a plushie and or pillow.
I...I...What is this?!
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I got my name from my parents. What's your excuse?
It's good that you're living in a scary place? You're the type to think of a Detroit slum like it's Las Vegas, aren't you?
Maybe it's because you live in a place where they aren't. I'm just guessing.
"Soul! Soooouuul! I'm over here! I have no idea why you removed me and stapled me to a tree, especially since you kinda need me to digest stuff for you, but can you take me back? It's co-o-o-o-old out here!"
Here I come, me! I better watch out.
Because sitting by trees is abnormal, like hearing voices. First your stomach, now a tree. You need some serious help, kid.
Because girly me would just jump down, and homie don't play that shit.
I imagine that's an expensive procedure, not to mention hard to do since you're jumping at the same time.
O.O
Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer co-star in Honey, I Shrunk the Princess! Coming this winter.
I tired to read this story. I go sleep now.
Because fuck those other days.
This story sucks ponybutt!!!!!!!
It is difficult to understand this story. The concept of it I like, but DAYUM you need some more filler and not just blatantly put out whatever comes to your mind and post it. Take your thoughts then expand from the words. Good start though!
I'm only half a toe in and you completely ruined this whole thing. Now, I don't want to review this piece of shittttttttttttttt!
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I may review it later, keep your eyes peeled!
Why should I read your story when you can't even be bothered to type the title correctly?
I'll just leave this here.
Guys, I know who Celesita is!
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>Mexican Celestia
Any what, lets get to the review!
Short Description:
Holy f
ck this makes so many questions visible its not even funny.
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This is, uhm, an interesting way to draw a reader in. I'll admit, it worked for a while. (Not counting why Celestia would imprison you) Then I saw THIS.
Where is the sex tag? Where is the bondage warning? I'm already terrified.
Long Description:
Why are you named Soul? Why do I care about your name if you won't even explain why it's important? You even politely say "Hi," and then you quickly say "Don't ask."
Oh, and also.
Alright, if you noticed I haven't picked apart the grammatical errors. I don't wanna. But hang on, when people THANK you for something, they don't NEED your permission. They are GRATEFUL. You don't wanna...like, deny them saying something like: "Oh thank you, Mister! Please, take this box of chocolates as a thanks!" You don't push that back like some jack
ss.
CELESTIA IS OFFERING THANKS TO SOMEBODY.
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You just gave away the whole story. THE WHOLE, STORY. You had this surprise, and sure you had it in the title, but COME ON. You can't reveal it in the story? You could have added some suspense or something to make me a little interested.
But then again...
IDUWANNADODASTOWYNEXT.
IDUWANNA.
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I read while I listened to your magnificent reading voice,
Awesome chapter you doing a amazing job i can't wait to see the next chapter
I like the story, but somehow i get the feeling that the story could turn out a way i don´t like. I think it is only because i once read a similar story, at least with Celestia and a Human and it turned out not very well.
I give the story a change, till now i like it.
Trollfic! Definitely trollfic! Retreat! RETREAT!
This is a good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
I find this interesting please make more chapters ps som people dislike this but don't write for the haters write for those who enjoy your work
interesting, I like it. . . .you have my attention
One paragraph in... looks promising. (scrolls down to post comment)
Hot, dang! That's a LOT of negative comments! Still gonna read but... wow I felt a little kick in the gut of the kindness toward you humans. (shakes head 
) Some of you should be ashamed. I don't think it's necessary to say (in beg read letters) that a WORK IN PROGRESS story is utter garbage. Good reviews (even by people that despise to the care what they are reviewing... to the point of saying "it was so cat killing-ly bad...") don't just say: "THIS IS UTTER TRASH", they may say "THIS IS UTTER TRASH" but it will also have "but at least the story was interesting and with better actors and a better director, it could have been much more engaging." My point is that: you should at least say something good about what it is your saying is a peace of sh*& when your calling it a piece of Sh*&. Now, if you exuse me, I'm going to read this and put in my 2 cents.
Finished, and I will admit, there were a lot of grammar mistakes. But it wasn't "a piece of sh&^" as you humans have put it. The story was good, great even, and I can't wait to see where this is going! Keep it up
!
Not sure if trollfic...
He should just start talking and shock those ponies and give Twilight seizures.
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Maybe soon or maybe not.
How did Celestia "save him" and why does he accept it as a good enough reason to become property?
Also, fuck Celestia's "rules".
> Writer can't be bothered to spell Celestia's name right in the title
> Writer doesn't bother to fix it after it's been pointed out repeatedly
> Description makes no sense
> Better things to do with my time than read this...
5441909 Well, she lied to him, I think. And He accept it because it's that or a forest fill with monster with no shelter, no food ...
And yes, Celestia's "rules" sucks !
okay i admit it is funny, but i think she should not be so fast that angry.
I had to take a look again, for a moment i thought you would maybe do a romance story, but then again i don´t even know if he should be her pet in the whole story or if he is allowed to speak sooner or later. I know it is to soon right now, but if it is that good and funny all the time, then i would like a romance sequel. I know we have to see where this story is going first, after that i ask again.
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Patience... ;3
very good, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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It was so charming the way it was!
Damn it, why did you point it out again?
5458930 Title's still grammatically incorrect. So there's that.
I really don't want to harp on grammar, because a lot of people are (SO SHUT UP ABOUT IT!!!) but...
You should really fix this part. But again, SHUT THE F%^& UP ABOUT IT!!!!
...
.... wait ....
... ok... so... I'm just gonna get this straight:
He says:
...
HA HA HA!!! Oh, oooooh I love that! 
He's... 
he's their plushy! Humans have pony plushies, and he's a ponies plushy!!! Oh that's awsome! Good job!
BFFF
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Thanks for the heads up and glad you found it enjoyable!
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The voice was, no offense to Scootareader, oddly fitting considering the story.
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You, sir, are a brave soul for trudging through this. I would've cracked long before this was done.
next plz great story
i look forward to more ^_^
Is this fic dead? Please don't be so...
This is a really good fic, and I enjoy it, but it had a lot of errors. I don't want one of my favorite fics to receive so much hate because of errors.
(If you think this isn't going to happen, this is a good Sonic the Hedgehog game that had a lot of errors.)
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More please!
REALLY REALLY
I appreciate your stories BUT COME ON you can't leave stories like THIS to gather dust. THAT'S JUST CRUEL
new chapter please
new chapter please. the last part on chapter 2 made me luagh