Just a guy trying out his luck at writing.
This is the story of the mane six and the three young fillies as they are stranded on a deserted island without the ability to use their powers. Dark forces are at work and the ponies face trecherous hardships. Will they survive or succumb to insanity? My first Fanfic.
*Edit* Now complete and unfixed from my first mistakes! I like to see where I came from, but that might just be me...
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Just wanted to throw this in since I noticed it a lot throughout this chapter....
Its "arguing" not "argueing"
But otherwise, the story has been pretty good so far!
Very interesting story can't wait to see how it ends.
Didn't see that you updated the story! Silly me. But wow, the rest of it was great! Some gruesome stuff, but I thought it was really good for your first fic!
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Glad ya liked it.
Thanks! I've started another already, though.
699738 Thank you so much!
Glad ya like it.
Good story, but why did one of them have to die!!!!!
Well, you certainly have talent!
That was very well written...
Now here comes the part where I break down crying
That was a terribly heart-wrenching story and I hope to God that you, the mane six or anyone else in this freakin universe never has to go through that.
I honestly have no idea how many happy stories I will have to read to counter this one.
If I'm ever trapped on an island with my friends I will literally show more love than Gondi, Jesus, and whoever else and do as much work to help things keep running! This will be my new survival guide. I don't care if I get killed as long as this doesn't happen.
Anyway thank you for your time and effort.
py!
Like I said you have talent.... Please write something really hap
Random fact of the day: Applejack woke up next to Rainbow Dash in a loving embrace realizing it was all a dream. Rainbow Dash slowly stirred and they both Bucked all morning long the End!!!
1485185 Aww... shucks.
Glad you enjoyed my story so. I have other works if they may interest you.
Now writing a happy story? I've thought of it, but can't ever bing myself around. If I ever do though, I'll be sure to let you know.
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Yay
an author replied to me 
I'm so happy right now!!!!
Your a fantastic author..
.. come on I know you have a happy
story just waiting to burst out (Not in the Alien sense
)
Random fact of the day: Everypony is dumb, Trixie
is better than everypony - A message from the Trixie is better than Everything Foundation... Trixie I'm not typing that... OK fine...sigh... Twilight Sparkle sucks Trixie!
You do realize what that sounds like right?
Anyway goodluck and keep on writing!!!
1488268 I shall! And you just keep on being you!
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FOR MY AMUSEMENT
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I just noticed something that I think you should know.
In the story you've written you were writing Sweetie Belle as Sweetie Bell.
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Fanfictions are actually what brought me to the show and inspired my newfound love for writing. This story was my first, and I left it and all its many mistakes as a reminder of where I've come from in my writing career.
Thanks for pointing that out though. Hope you still enjoyed.
Yes. I wrote this before I was even a fan of the show actually, so I didn't know how to spell the characters names.
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Alright, that makes sense.
Still, great story!
Applejack is a JERK! >:(
That's just...upsetting.
Not to mention Pinkie Pie is best pony.