Malekith, evil sorcerer and king of the Dark Elves, was banished for his wicked deeds thousands of years ago. But now, he has returned, and Discord has joined him! To make matters worse, the Elements of Harmony are not powerful enough to stop him.
Kinda, sort of a crossover with "Thor: God of Thunder," but he won't be appearing. Fic also contains ideas and concepts borrowed from "Doctor Strange," "The Dresden Files," and "Green Lantern."
I cant say i have any problems with this story. Keep er going feller and stay positive.
interesting I'll be on the lookout for the next update
Congrats on maKing a legit prologue, and not something that should be the first chapter!
I like how you flawlessly integrated two dimensions as if it was the most natural thing in the world.
Some things that I noticed, good and bad:
Dark Matter is questionable as a name, but hey, a name's a name.
Nice switch of perspectives!
XD Sadly, in reality, there is no such thing as forever. XD
Harsh... and demographically speaking, one child per family would result in the extinction of their race anyways, seeing as the stable fertility level is 2.1 children per family (since some families have no children or only one). But enough science and academics, let's continue!
Argh, cryptic riddle, doth has me hooked.
This is really good for a trans dimensional Crossover! You sir, have earned a like and a favorite!
Just notiCed Loki in the picture. XD
Would be interesting if paired with Discord, but let's not get too cRossover-crazy. XD
Eh, I liked it. I might not enjoy this as much as a fan of Thor would, and might not continue to read because of that, but know that you have my support as far as your skills as a writer goes.