Zap-O-Lantern

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Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Apple Bloom discover that there is some truth to an old horror tale that was made up as part of a smear campaign against the introduction of Zap Apple products back in Granny Smith’s day.

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http://lister-of-smeg.deviantart.com/gallery/48430080/Zap-O-Lantern

Chapters (3)

1 The Hospital · 22nd Nov 2014 · 3,446 words
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2 The Search Begins · 22nd Nov 2014 · 3,650 words
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3 The Next Victims · 22nd Nov 2014 · 3,122 words
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Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #1 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 1 The Hospital ·

I like this. First comment.

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #2 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 2 The Search Begins ·

Pinkie Pie’s search for answers wet on for hours,

Out of habit, Rainbow Dash sat on her hoof and held it to Pinkie Pie.

Is something wrong here?

Brass Polish

Brass Polish #3 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

5301111 Not anymore. Just fixed it. Cheers, dude.

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #4 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

This is a really intriguing premise. But Crosspatch and Lazybug shouldn't get off so easy. They were going to destroy the Apple's free will.

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #5 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

Before Apple Bloom could yell for help, Crosspatch shoved her through the CMC cape and squashed her into the jar,

Apple Bloom fits in a jar? Call me a skeptic but I don't think that works.

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #6 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

5301183 Cheers!

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #7 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

“If I don’t get outta here, our family’s gonna lost the farm,” she said.

Took me a while to understand what that meant.

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #8 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

Crosspatch and Lazybug should have been sent to prison. They were making an attempt on somepony's life and they just get forgiven. Prolonged servitude to the Apple family at least. Is their no justice? If I were there I'd at least tie them to a chair and threaten them. This. Was. An. Attack!

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #9 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

“Oh, come on. You don’t still consider us enemies, do you?” inquired Crosspatch. “Are we not square now?”

They should be. They should be incarcerated criminals.

Brass Polish

Brass Polish #10 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

5301493 I'll be sure to give you a call if I need a proof reader. Cheers.

Brass Polish

Brass Polish #11 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

5301523 Aye. As was Trixie's takeover of Ponyville. As was Sunset Shimmer's demolition of Canterlot High. As was Discord turning Equestria upside down.

The forgiveness ratio in the show to those who ask for/earn it is about 50/50, and Crosspatch and Lazybug managed to crawl to the good side.

Shining Dawn

Shining Dawn #12 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · 3 The Next Victims ·

5301590 The thing is, they all acknowledged that they where basically terrorists. And Discord was turned to stone again. And all of them should still got off easy.

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