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  • Monday
    The Last Roundup #6 - I'm All About That Box

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  • Sunday
    So I Just Bet RainbowBob...

    ...five bucks that he couldn't eat a whole bucket of worms

    [10/18/14, 7:02:09 PM] Obselescence: I can assure you that "Master Chief and Commander Shepard ride to Equestria on Nightmare Moon" will not end well

    [10/18/14, 7:02:11 PM] RainbowBob: Nupe

    [10/18/14, 7:02:25 PM] RainbowBob: RainbowBob will prove Obs wrong

    [10/18/14, 7:02:31 PM] Obselescence: You will not.

    Terms of the Bet:

    -RainbowBob writes a story.

    -Prompt: "Master Chief and Commander Shepard ride to Equestria on Nightmare Moon"

    -4,000-10,000 Word Min-Max.

    -Story due by November 1st.

    -Cannot be a Crackfic.

    -Hard Mode: Cannot be a Comedy.

    -Story Must Be Good (as determined by a yet-undetermined panel of three independent judges)

    -Loser pays $5 to Winner

    Whoever wins, we all lose.

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    The Last Roundup Question

    Hi guys. If you've all got a moment, I'd like to ask something.

    So, The Last Roundup has been going on for about five weeks now, going on six, and while it started out fairly promising, I've noticed something of a disheartening trend in that it doesn't seem to be getting much of a particular response from people. There haven't been all that many comments on the posts themselves as of late, and the last two suggestion threads got a total of zero suggestions. Which sort of makes me wonder if this is actually something people really enjoy and want to see continue, or if the overall sentiment's kind of lukewarm and there's something better I could be doing with my time re: bringing you guys stuff you'd want to see.

    But I'unno, that's just how the response lately has felt to me. I'm aware that there aren't a lot of ways to promote/spread this sort of thing beyond what I've been able to do for it off my own follow-base, so it's understandable that there's limited power for anyone who might feasibly be interested to actually find this. Which is sad, but that's just life, I guess. That said, if the people who're already aware of it aren't really that interested in it, I guess that'd be something of a final nail in the coffin. So I'd kinda want to see what you guys have to say on the matter.

    Thoughts?

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Shining Armor has wanted to be a Royal Guard ever since he was a colt. It's been his hope and his dream, and he's closer to it now than ever before.

The only question left is if it's worth leaving his little sister behind.

First Published
27th Apr 2012
Last Modified
27th Apr 2012
#1 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

Awwwww :heart: I loved this :twilightsmile: such a good story! Well done!:derpytongue2:

#2 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

This was good.  :)

#3 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

You already know how I feel about it. Just commentin' so you know I read it.

#4 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

D'awwwww :twilightsmile: I hope this story continues, but it's completed:fluttercry:. Insta fav + thumb

#5 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

Good job, I'm favoriting this. Be more confident.

#6 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

What a great story,seriously,I almost shed a tear. That's extremely hard to do. Great job on this fic.

#7 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

This is so beautiful.  :fluttercry:

(Time for the cliche phrase)

Instant favorite!

#8 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

Short, simple, and brief. And one hell of a story. Me like long time. :pinkiehappy:

#9 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

That was really sweet.

#10 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

There's so much potential in Shining Armour's character that the season finale didn't even touch on. I'm so glad there are such talented bronies to provide gems like this story and this song.

#11 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

*notices the most adorable of all screencaps of Shining Armor, and has to read*

That was ... sweet.

#12 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

MEIN GOTT

This was sweet.


~Jack

Obselescence
Moderator
#13 · 129w, 4d ago · · ·

Shout's out to NorsePony by the way, for helping immensely in editing this.

#14 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Dat title.

#15 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Just awesome, Obs. As usual.

#16 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

I had a feeling this would get featured. A very good job sir.

#17 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

I was expecting this to be sad, but I'm glad I read it. What a sweet story.:unsuresweetie:

But this namby pamby story still hasn't gotten me any closer to my cutie mark.:scootangel:

#18 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

YES! There's not enough of these kind of stories!

Brilliant!

#19 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Great story:ajsmug:.

Congrats on making the front page!

#20 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

This is nice. :pinkiesmile:

#21 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

T'was a great story...

#22 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

FUS RO *dawwwww.*

Truly gropin- I MEAN TOUCHING

#23 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Too awesome! :rainbowdetermined2:

#24 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Try to relax...I'm not going to eat you

LOLS XD

#25 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

adorable

#26 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Slightly said, but heartwarming overall. Love it.

#28 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

good, but still doesn't fill the void of "why oh why did they handwave everything of importance in the last episodes!" :facehoof:

speaking of which, why no mention of Shining Armor's Cutie Mark? You've got a lot of territory to cover and no canon to restrain you, go for it!

#29 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

D'AWWWWWWW!! .... that was so sweet.

#30 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Wow, this turned out to be a lot happier of an ending than I had expected. Not that I think that's a bad thing, haha. Nice little feel-good story here, great work, Obs!

#31 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

manly tears; they have been shed

#32 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

I have nothing to say other than it was incredibly well written, and a great idea. Fantastic job.

#33 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

hmm weird a happy ending takes me closer to crying than any of the other endings wth

#34 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Manly tears

#35 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

This made me cry when i finished. Not much but still. The only books i've ever read that made me cry were Past Sins and I Could Have Been. The greatest books of all time in my life..... This is a close third for me.:pinkiesad2: < thats happy btw. :twilightsmile:

#36 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

i was listening to bbbff while reading this and it just made me burst out crying. especially when he talked about dying. but i did kinda smile when twi was saying how he had the best scores ever. please please please add another chapter. I'll love love love you forever if you do.

#37 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

These were the questions I asked when I saw the finale. "Twilight has a brother? Where was he for oh... EVERYTHING important in the last two years? Equestria really takes civil defense seriously I guess..."

#38 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

I agree you could have gone further in some parts, but I really think it's a nice fleshing out of Shining Armor's background. Made me well up a few times.

#39 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Princess Celestia's mane is an Aurora Borialis... not a rainbow.... but great story anyways :twilightsmile:

#40 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

D'aww. That was nice. Good work, Obselescence. :twilightsmile: I'm glad it had a happy ending. Those are my favorite kinds of endings.

(As a side note, your name is terribly difficult to spell without looking at it every five seconds. Or maybe that's just me being a derp. Meh.)

#41 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Very nice.

#42 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Nice.  Really all I can say about it.

#43 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

First, I'd like to say thanks for writing this story, I'm glad it exists. I'm in the Air Force and I also have a younger sister. I put off enlisting because of this exact reason. It still makes me feel guilty... :pinkiesad2: Like I've left her behind. This feeling is likely never to go away, but just knowing that other people have also been put in this situation is comforting.

#44 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Hmm...the Equestrian military must take things very seriously. I mean, they don't get to leave at all? Maybe, it's a stallionpower issue. What I mean is that they probably don't have the numbers to rotate shifts.

Either way, this story is sweet and the emotions were done well as the bond between Shining and Twiley. :twilightsmile::fluttercry:

Good work!

Silver out!

#45 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

It might be just me, but I didn't found this SO sad. Actually, it was more like... Hearthwarming. Cute story, very well written, explores a bit further into Shining Armour and Twilight's relationship, develops SA's character a bit more, and it had a good feeling overall. Just like a few other people here said: Given the fact that SA's character and his relationship with Twi were explored very little in the show (so fans have, as Truth_Seeker said, "a lot of territory to cover and no canon to restrain" them), I feel like this story could be continued, at least, with a second chapter. But, it's your choce after all. If you ever decide to continue this, I (and several more?) will be waiting anxiously. And, if you decided to write this as a one-shot, then I just have to say that I'm glad I read it, and I certainly enjoyed it. A lot.

Whether it is on a new chapter or in a totally different story, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

#46 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

FimFiction needs a tag for "D'aw-Inspiring" stories like this one. Well done, 3.5/5 stars.

#47 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Ohh, Twilight, you have no idea, don't you?

I really d'awwwed at this, you did a great job with the TS/SA bigbro/littlesis dynamic. Hope to see more from you soon! :pinkiehappy:

#48 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. It's heartwarming and adorable, the brother/sister relationship between the two. I really enjoyed this.

#49 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Shining armor just looks so derpy!

At least his coat is white,that way he can join the Royal Guard.I mean,with the way the selections are going,only white and grey ponies who look identical are accepted.The total military strength of Canterlot would be a whopping 23 at this point.   :rainbowlaugh:

But big fan of the story,I absolutely enjoy moral dilemmas. :pinkiehappy:

The way its all played out is just so in sync with what Shining Armor would do.So for that,I grant you a mustache. :moustache:

#50 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

Nice story. The ending wasn't what it was made out to be, but made sense.

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