A unicorn filly wakes up in Ponyville to discover she doesn't remember anything about herself. She leaves Ponyville, hoping to find something out about herself. On her journey, she befriends a small amount of ponies, including the Flim-Flam brothers. But the full grey filly discovers a dark secret that only she and Celestia share, and Celestia will do anything to keep her secret hidden.
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SPG: Wow, this most closely follows my style of putting conversation in paragraphs without line breaks. Overall, very good.
Plot: About a filly with no colours? Oh, this makes for a
Overall: Nothing here. It's pure class. Upvoted.
I just wanted to add that the story will become progressively darker and more depressing as the story goes on. I will add trigger warnings at parts in case a subject comes up that someone is uncomfortable with.
i like it