Chrysalis last hope

After the attack on Canterlot lead by Chrysalis had failed. Celestia and Luna have pushed Chrysalis back to her hive.
Her Hive can't live like this anymore. They are dying.
Only a drop of hope remains.

Chapters (2)

Hope is on both sides · 3rd Dec 2014 · 2,573 words
2,573
Download .txt
Download .html
Don't talk about it! · 16th Dec 2014 · 1,013 words
1,013
Download .txt
Download .html

Comments ( 12 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 12
- Newest First
- Oldest First

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #1 · Dec 3rd, 2014 · · · Hope is on both sides ·

Needs grammar errors corrected. Looking forward to finding out who this guy is.

A Dark Reminder

A Dark Reminder #2 · Dec 16th, 2014 · · · Don't talk about it! ·

Added to Read Later.

thenamless

thenamless #3 · Dec 16th, 2014 · · · Don't talk about it! ·

5390421
Hope you enjoy it!

SilentH9

SilentH9 #4 · Dec 16th, 2014 · · · Don't talk about it! ·

Tracking
Also it's "angel" not "angle" unless Chrysalis has degrees.

thenamless

thenamless #5 · Dec 16th, 2014 · · · Don't talk about it! ·

5390542
Yeah...
Thx!

Old Diggy

Old Diggy #6 · Dec 16th, 2014 · · · Hope is on both sides ·

"Well then my queen. It seems I am no longer at home. So I might as well make myself useful here." I watched as the Queen raised an eyebrow. "So then." I bowed. "I am yours to server but I will not call you my queen until I see fit."

Old Diggy

Old Diggy #7 · Dec 16th, 2014 · 1 · · Don't talk about it! ·

What was the point of him saying 'I will not call you my queen until I see fit' last chapter if all he calls her is 'my queen'? Have him call her Chrysalis, or if you're really that adamant about it then have him call her Queen Chrysalis; but not 'my queen'. Also last chapter you said that he had no defense against magic, he must have some kind of defense if he can use magic himself.

thenamless