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A dangerous dragon causes havoc in Ponyville, so their newly appointed Royal Taskforce enlist the help of the closest thing Twilight Sparkle had to a friend before leaving Canterlot. But hereditary alicorn Amber Aldis quickly reaches the conclusion that Twilight was a poor candidate for Princess Celestia’s new member of the Royal Family, and devises a plan to take Twilight’s place on the day of the Summer Sun Celebration when Nightmare Moon returned…

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Amber Aldis quickly reaches the conclusion that Twilight was a poor candidate for Princess Celestia’s new member of the Royal Family, and devises a plan to take Twilight’s place on the day of the Summer Sun Celebration when Nightmare Moon returned…

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The plan doesn't work.


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What? You don't like super bland alicorn OC's that have a very weak backstory connection to one of mane 6? With maybe some sort plan to take her place during the Summer Sun Celebtraion, which would make her the element of Magic instead of Twilight and the friend of the other mane 5?
Coz...That's my kind of fic!

5293352 I can't read that...my IPad doesn't support that feature, it's just black lines for me.

5293357 OK. The plan doesn't work. Amber Aldis more or less stabs herself in the hoof with her plan.

5293359 Even knowing that I'm still hesitant to read this, Alicorn OC's tend to be hated beyond belief by everyone, hnce the high dislike ratio. Why couldn't she just be a unicorn?

5293368 Because storywise, she sees no difference between herself and Twilight Sparkle upon reuniting with her, and comes to the conclusion that she could easily have had more success as Celestia's protégé if she had been.

This story's a year old, so I guess spoilers don't matter.

5293382 And just how did she become an alicorn? Without an explanation as to why she is actually an alicorn, the stpry isn't going to take off without recieving flak on the runway.

5293397 Well you know how people say that if the Cakes had had one baby instead of two, it would have been an alicorn? The same goes for Amber Aldis. If she'd been a twin, she'd be either a unicorn or a pegasus.

This is one of the worst things i have ever read.

5293417 I have never heard of that theory ever being stated. At all.

5293818 Pity. It was one of the first conversations I came across after I first saw Baby Cakes.

Sadly, I couldn't tell you where. I've since forgotten.

Wow, much dislike over OCs, and then people expect not to be called a hypocrite when they defend Fallout: Equestria's characters. really liked this, going to read the rest of yours now, expect multiple comments.

5297732 Cheers, dude. I won't pretend I wasn't discouraged by yesterday's events.

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No. You're actually the first person I've seen to ever say that one cake baby could have been an alicorn. A hermaphrodite would have been more likely.

Adventure packed and and awesome story! Faved!

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What about a hermaphrodite alicorn? ;)

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