Oh thank god it's just his kidney I thought took his........well you know what I mean

Good moral there. Grimm destroyed Pinkies life (aka taking her life) while Pinkie LITERALLY took Grimms life. Clever! (Assuming the Grimm in the story, not the real one, later on died from blood loss, that is :S )

awesome story... at least that should teach anyone a lesson not to write any gore or grimdark story anyway...

LOL

she stole... his kidney... and he didn't realise... until it was mentioned. WHAT. A. MORON.

Heh. heh heh.

I jusy had a weird flashback to charlie the unicorn there.

Shame pinkie became the said "killer" in the fic (minus baking him into a cupcake) by killing grimm* thus making her a murderer great job pinkie

*or by taking his kidney which he soon probably died from due to major blood loss (as pinkie cut probs a hole in his chest)

there's a moral to this story. and that is never mess with pinkie pie

You'd better think before you mess with the Pink.

Guys? *Ugh* Guys?

AW MAN THEY TOOK MY FREAKING KIDNEY!

So this was ultimately a self-fulfilling prophecy for Pinkie Pie.

Pinkie Pie's not the only one, of course.  How does Rainbow Dash feel about "Rainbow Factory" , Big Mac about "Sweet Apple Massacre" , Twilight about "A Ponyville Horror" , or Fluttershy about "Pattycakes" ?

charlie, you silly unicorn...

*gasp* that gave me an idea! my next story is going to be charlie the unicorn in equestria !!!!

You have entertained Doom, Doom will mercifully let you live.

Pretty poorly written but gave me a good laugh. Lol.

He deserved it

>Implying Pinkie Pie wouldn't find Cupcakes hilarious

I'd be more worried it would give her some ideas.

>>507284507284

Well, she let him live.

Straight up, and in all seriousness, I would not want to spend any time alone with the author of any of those "fan"fics. It takes someone with something seriously twisted in the head to write something like that, and the thought of having to socialize with someone like that vaguely nauseates me.

>>510415510415

No, the scary thing is that you probably wouldn't be able to spot them at all. Unless they told you about it, you'd never know what horrors sprung forth from their twisted mind, what eldritch terrors lurked in the dark recesses of their soul...oooh, recess! Weeee!

>>506831506831 So I wasn't the only one. *shiver*

Side note: Why is it always the kidney? We need those!

>>510946510946 That's what freaks me out about those guys. You could've met a new H.P Lovecraft and not know, as long as those emotions and thoughts aren't visible on the surface. And people can come up with some really messed up things if they have a reason to. (Sanity level dropped to: ... )

>>507284507284 There's a fic all about those. I could... you know... provide a link... if you... want... (He hasn't done most of those yet, but he has done SAM and some of the Rule 34s. And it includes a linebacker. Somehow. And G 3.5 is weaponized. Want a link?)

>>511437511437 Sounds interesting.

>>510415510415>>512032512032>>511437511437>>510946510946

You do know that most gore writers are normal people, right?

You have to be normal to understand what would freak out normal people, otherwise it doesn't work as well.

>>516687516687

Shhh, I'm trying to freak out the normals. :P

Clever girl

i dident read it but gudging by the comment i dont have to

Justice!

god pinkie that was taking it too far i mean damn he could have taken the fic down and put an apology fic up for you

Charlie the unicorn referance

Oh shoot I thought Pinkie took his....hotdog.

Phew!!

BITCH STOLE MY KIDNEY!

what about twilight and the experiments of twilight sparkle or applebloom and harvest? and rarity and raritiy's new dress

Contrary to my story I don't actually "hate" cupcakes and I have nothing against its author though I do think he is total troll

JUSTICE!!!

I'm surprised he hasn't commented on this.  <.>

Grimm was a mix of scared, awed and strangely aroused.

all my lol's are belong to this

Oh god I never proofread this! That's what happens when you write a fic at 2 AM XD Sorry about all the spelling and grammar fuck-ups. I hope its better now

>>507830507830

Do that. Do it right now.

Of my god... it makes sense. Grimm is a unicorn, but not just any unicorn... CHARLIE THE UNICORN!

CHAAAARRLIE!  CHAAAAARRLIE!

>>532480532480 the damage was already done and irreversible, even if he (somehow) could erase the fic from the internet (there is not only the original, but multiple copies, parodies etc), he still won't be able to erase it from the memories of all the ponies.

>>13145811314581 ok first wow i posted that 20 weeks ago and 2 Well even though there are more cupcakes stories does not mean he wrote them

>>13145971314597 But as I said, the damage is irreversible, kind of like severely maiming or killing someone - there is no going back. Same with the story - no pony will trust Pinkie ever again, the story is safely backed up in their memories.

(and I missed the "20 weeks" part - though it was 2 days)

>>13146051314605 nope 20 weeks ago but i would trust Pinkie and give her a great big HUG

>>13146221314622 Maybe humans are more jaded and do not react the same way as ponies did. Story like that probably burrows deeply into your mind and stays there, you have that nagging feeling that maybe, just maybe, the basement of Sugarcube Corner is like that. Especially after the episode "party of one". That's the thing about "Cupcakes" - the story is kind of in character for Pinkie - after all, a human who smiles all the time is creepy as hell, maybe Pinkies normal behavior is "on the edge" for ponies and after reading the story a lot of them went "now I get it why she acts like that all the time - she is insane, while Rainbow is not dead (meaning the story is not true), but Pinkie might completely lose it one day and try to reenact it".

And yea, when you wrote 20 weeks I checked it.

>>13146581314658 Ya i know that i was talking to one of my friends unleashedtwilight on skype onetime and he even told me cupcakes scares the living shit out of him