• Member Since 8th Sep, 2013
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Writer Fire


Ok i finally updated my Bio. Im not a good writer i will admit that. I write just for fun. and come on who doesn't like to write a story here and there? Well sorry if my storys suck.

Comments ( 71 )

interesting.
i like it.
Edit: lol, people can't take opinions. *shrugs*

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Oh! Sorry, I didn't see you there. Hey, are you looking at that nice piece of bandwagon pie? I know I am!

Say, would you like some? All you have to do is write about a story using a overused and boring concept! Wait a second... You already did! Enjoy the pie, my friend!

While not being as, ahem, direct as 5294429, (s)he is right: this is a bit too cliche. My recommendation is to have an editor look at your whole outline before you continue. Things can be fixed...you just need to have people assist you with that.

I was expecting something scary to happen....then we found out that foxy has trust issues:rainbowhuh:

Please make Freddy some what evil, like an old grumpy person

Damn. I want to review this but i'm a little nervous that i'm gonna see a jump scare. (Not sure if the authors are still able to add pics in their stories)

Thank you for the people who are giving me some advice, but I kinda wrote this story because it was the only thing popping into my head. I'm not expecting for this to get a lot of likes. I'm just typing up new chapters when my mind just says "hey make a new chapter for this only." So while this story is going on, I'm typing my other stories that I haven't gotten to for at least a couple of months. (Counter Strike Global Offensive may have something to do with the delay of chapters as well) so read it. If you don't like it I'm ok with that. Well see ya next time.

5294429

If you get a piece of pie for writing a bandwagon story, I think it's time I do a Fallout: Equestria story!

this is really good, i hope to se mkore chapters in the furture way to go bro

5294758
Don't bother yourself with a small piece, my friend! I know of a big pie... A huge one ripe for the taking!

Cards Against Humanity.

Shh, I never told you anything. Now go! Go make shitty stories for the masses for that nice piece of pie!

5294633 ikr and like wtf bonnie and foxy are male charectors. I would prefer so scary that I cant stop watching, or at least hiliairity as the guard shuts his pants, but instead we get "hey you wanna play monopoly, oh what about dungeons and dragons." (Yes I understand that they probably would not finish the game anyways.)

Its Neh I like it but ya know its a nice story got nothing else to say other than
5294670 Nice shark tits.



Lol.

Oh boy!

Guess that means I should update my story.

Thanks, enjoyed the chapters. Be sure to update!

Heh. I wrote a one-shot yesterday with that cover art.

5295551 Everyone knows me for those now :0 So next time you see Shark Tits you know its me :3

This... This... is epic. I like how you r63 bonnie and foxy, foxy is my fave, and girl foxy, in otherwords, a foxy lady, is awesmness.

Ok so for the people who said they wanted Foxy and Bonnie to be male I literally flipped a coin. One side mal other female. They both landed on female so I decided to make Golden Freddy and Freddy the only two males other than Mike.

The guys in the picture are the robots from Five Nights At Freddy's, right? (No, I've never played the game and know nothing about it.)

Oh. My. Luna. This... This is the funniest fanfic on FNAF other than five minutes at freddys. Join the roupand add this. Please.

freddy the is the true terror

"Oh uh sorry just kinda went plank

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some minor errors but otherwise this story is an interesting idea

Great story keep the train choo chooing

OMG I LOVE THIS I WANT MORE PLEASEEEE IS THERE ANY ROMANCE WHO IS HE GOING TO GO OUT WITH BONNIE, CHICA, FOXY

I WANT MORE WERE IS IT FUCKIN UPDATE NOW!!

If there is sex you'll have to take down the teen rating

I don't care if this has to go up to M rating or not either way this is gonna lead to some good stuff even if he skips it.

Pffft, Mike? C'mon, everyone knows Mark is the best guard

What.. is all i have to say. Not that I'm confused, or don't like what happened, all there is to say is "What?" :rainbowlaugh:

I don't care, sex or not, this story good, but sex, saying something during that could lead to more depth in story

BRD

Is Bonnie a sex-bot or something?

Because the last time I checked, Robots don't have sex parts or go in to "heat".

Just asking.

BRD

5361722
All will be explained don't worry.

stfu spartan208 u cry baby


I WANT MORE
can you put more into this chapter because you took like 2 weeks just to make that chapter im not saying your lazy but your kinda being slow no offense.

Was better without cussing and the you-know-what at the end.

who gives a shit about swearing omg literly everyone on this god damn planet swears dont be such an idiot i bet you swear every fuckin day m8



i want sex scene next chapter please!!

Comment posted by Actually leaving now deleted Dec 10th, 2014

Hey now guys. No fighting. It's a story for everybody to enjoy. Not to fight for.

5365575 There. Thanks. I did enjoy the story, however!!!

Well......uhm
NOW WE KNOW WE CAN FUCK THE FNAF CAST THANKS FOR THE INFO.



Freakout mode begin!

That was unnervingly short

"Hey Guys yes these recent chapters have been well short. I'm kinda running out of ideas for the story. So what I'm thinking it you guys can play out the story. As you post in the comments for something you want to happen in the story or what the chapter should be about. The ones with the most likes I will use in the next chapter. (Two or three days for voted and posting.) So let's see how this works out. See you next time.

Heres an idea, make theb have sex poker with chica, and fox, or true or dare.

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