So...Celestia is Sethisto?

Oh lord this is going to suck.

(not story wise, Pony world wise)

This was definatly an awesome fic. Hilarious to the end. Loved Fluttershy's part of the story.

*Sunglasses* I don't give a DAM. *LAUGHS TO DEATH*

>>506749506749

The real reason we never got any Trixie is Season 2: Celestia captured her and dragged her to the palace to do private shows on command. For whatever twisted meaning of "private show" you want to imagine.

>>506941506941

I do kinda take pride in the fact that I wrote a story in which Fluttershy uses the word "sex-tastic" without actually breaking character. I feel terrible about making her cry though

>>509595509595

Thank you! Half the people who read my story think that's a typo! I'm like "go read the line before it again!"

>>509640509640

No,thank YOU for making this AWESOME story!

Unfortunately,disappoint from Fluttershy want Caramel.

>>509640509640 Don't worry, I'm sure she'd forgive you if she knew it was for a great cause.

>>510833510833 I think she wanted caramel as in the stuff, not the pony. Atleast that's the vibe I got. It was part of her wild fantasies, after all.

>>510833510833

>>511361511361

Yes I meant caramel the sticky sugar liquid, not Caramel the pony. Forgot about him. Maybe I'll tweak that line to say "caramel syrup" or "caramel sauce" instead.

It's always the quiet ones that turn out to be the kinkiest

“Fluttershy! No!” Twilight cried out. “Nineteen Eighty Fort isn’t structurally sound!”

Why did I laugh so hard at this? Just... Why?

Plot tumor! Nineteen Eighty-Fort! Renaldo changing to Ricardo halfway through AJ's part!

>>745617745617

I'm glad you liked the first two, but the third one (Ricardo/Renaldo) is actually a GIGANTIC ERROR that apparently NONE of my pre-readers caught. It's been standardized to Ricardo throughout. Good eye!

>>745686745686

Huh. Well, I had assumed it was Applejack's mistake instead of yours; maybe your pre-readers did too?

>>512013512013

This ... may have caused me to interpret it as "syrup extracted from Caramel's dick".

>>745686745686

There's still one more "Renaldo" left there, back in the beginning of Rarity's part.

Now that that's out of my system, good show and all that. It was fun finding out what each character's main flaw was.

Rarity = believability

Twilight = immersion

Applejack = characterization

Pinkie = plot divergence

Fluttershy = telling

Rainbow Dash = cliche one-liners? Can I just put 'everything, ever' and be fine with it? Though, I guess she started out strong, if you ignore the renaming thing.

“Nineteen Eighty Fort isn’t structurally sound!”

Nuts, that's a way better fort pun than I could have ever come up with!

“Fluttershy! No!” Twilight cried out. “Nineteen Eighty Fort isn’t structurally sound!”

I can offer no higher compliment than to laugh at this line.  You are brilliant.  Also, who the hell in Equestria would have written an analogue to 1984?  Totalitarian sociopolitical movements can't be that common in a country ruled by a pharaoh-monarch.

I have to say, this was a bit too silly for my tastes, but nineteen eighty fort really cracked me up.