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A broken amulet drives the once Great and Powerful mare into a life on the lam. With no friends, no shelter (not even her beloved wagon!), Trixie finds herself doing whatever she can to stay one step ahead of the law, but trying to remain incognito proves difficult for the former showmare.

Written for a writing challenge, but never submitted. Rather than languish unread and gather dust, it was thought better to publish here for public consumption.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

Hmmm.... interesting. I'm going to follow this story and see where it leads too. :trixieshiftleft:

So far it looks promising. Though you gave us readers to much info what Trixie has come up with. I will not spoil it for my fellow readers but I know already what Trixie plan is. :raritywink:

Good read looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for writing it.

Oh cool. Another good chapter an came out pretty quickly After I read the first.

Not bad at all! I was afraid that when you released the first chapter that there wasn't a second one. Glad to see that isn't the case.

Great to see Trixie use her head to get out of some sticky situations. She knows how to use those tricks of hers to their greatest effect.

Curious to know what Luna wants with Trixie so badly. Because of the Alicorn Amulet? Makes me wonder just what mystery lies underneath that.

Nice work!

Whoo-ee, that was some adventure! It's a shame that it's over, because it certainly was a good read. Trixie may seem a little overpowered with her grand-scale illusions, but it worked great for the story nonetheless. (Hmm... maybe something happened to her when she broke the Alicorn Amulet?)

I'd love to see a continuation of this at some point. Luna may be upset at the destruction of her jewelry, but facts remain that this Trixie is incredibly resourceful, and you don't throw away useful things. Perhaps she can work off her sentence?

Trixie's going to use illusion magic to make the dragon think it's destroying the town, isn't she?

So, Trixie is still on the run and she has a partner-in-crime. Helping those in need while on the run from the law. I have to wonder why the Luna character tag, if she was only mentioned and didn't show up.

EDIT: Nevermind. Somehow confused this with another story.

I really liked this. Have a like/fav/follow.

Good stuff :pinkiesmile:

Looking forward to the sequel For a Few Bits More :trixieshiftright:

"it comes with friends" was a good one liner.

Nice. I love the honorable warrior types, like Griswold. I doff my nonexistent hat to the Great and Powerful One.

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