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HapHazred


It's called garbage can, not garbage can't.

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Vinyl doesn't care for coffee shops. They're too mellow. So when Octavia insists they both go to her favourite haunt, Long-shots, she isn't impressed.

In lower Canterlot, however, very little is as innocent as it seems, and Vinyl is about to hear a story from one of her friends previous visits... and she may not like what she hears.

What comes next is worse.

Teen for language and violence. Nothing graphic, but best to err on the side of caution.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

Reminds me of a couple of Old Man Bars I know, the ones full of cranky vets who carry guns and nice long knives no matter what local laws say. Great story!

5261621 Cheers. I was thinking of a cross between one of those and a small forties Chicago restaurant. Glad you liked the story!

Shadow posting hey ? Tss, you won't get away with this. Say hello to MY LITTLE FRIEND !

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....I thought it was fitting.

5261743 I... don't even understand anymore.

Hello!

Occasionally he asks the odd question to the pony next to him... he's really quite exiting

Well... whatever. That just means that exiting stuff happens to ponies outside the shop, which is totally normal. Nothing ever happens in here, is what I really mean."

exciting

5261976 pbt. You have failed me yet again, spelling!

Thanks for the heads up, will correct that right away.

5261981 My pleasure.

Amazing story; really liked the concept.

5261991 Thanks. I enjoyed writing it.

That was pretty tense. Very good characterization too!

5442238 Cheers. I had a lot of fun writing this one.

That was a pretty fucking cool oneshot. Loved the concept of it and the chaarterization was spot on with a slight twist on them. Pretty damn good Ultron approves.

Guns & Ponies, who woulda thunk it? Apparently you HapHazred, and you did an amazing job writing this one. Kinda didn't like how Vinyl was scared of pulling the trigger, she could of at least shot him in the leg :P Oh well, just thought she had more umph in her. ;)

Interesting twist on the usual fanon dynamic between Tavi and Vinyl.

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