This story is a sequel to Ab Initio-From the Start-Al Principio.
A sequel to the bad ending for From the Start, by Daxn who helped write this as well.
Celestia plan of making Twilight into her filly had succeeded. Life went by smoothly enough, however Celestia brash choice caused many ripples.
A year later, Celestia instructed Cadence to foalsit Twilight for the week while she is out on royal business. Being more than happy too, she accepted. However, Twilight presence has stirred up some rather strong emotions in her brother, Shining Armour. It would also seem without Celestia's influence something might be surfacing from Twilight subconscious, is Twilight salvageable?
Chapters (6)
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I don't know either
This is not bad, But in the end i'm unsure if Shinning abandoned his desire to help Twilight return to normal or not. Plus we don't know what are the responses from the others. Obviously something happened and Twilight's friends should have responded to the disappearance of Twilight and the news that She is now a foal. Not bad Alternate ending but it has some holes
5306547 Well this was only ment a a oneshot and that's all wasn't ment to be a full fledge second story.
5306595 Its alright No worries, I don't beat down and stuff. Its a nice oneshot, I'm just looking at specific stuff in my head that I won't worry about. You did good
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What's the deal, SuperPinkBrony?
I just want to know what I have screwed up (aside from formatting, I am usually careful with that.)
5307252 I just wasn't sure if the statement was true or not.
bad end? but that story hasn't had any end yet.....
*checks original story*
holy fucking shit he's labeled it as finished? the hell could have happened in 2 more short chapters to put a close to that heap of a fic? guess ima go find out.....
so , there i was clopping away to fetish story , and it's like oh boy twi got nerves from celestia's odd actions , op now celestia's doing unknown magical shit , op twi's slering her words now , op shit's bout to get real pretty soon here i bet , there it is twi asking “Can I go use potty?”
and then
FUCKINGLOLWUT???!?
WTF LOL XD ......
that's complete? that looks more like it only just begun.....
5309972 Look never intended this to somehow wrap up everything about the previous story its more of a oneshot side story to be fair.
5310277 the other story already has a warp up , this is an alt ending that only seems to set the stage for a huge continuation of the main story as a sequel.....
5310308 Well i'll talk with Daxn see what he thinks, if you ahve ideas you could pm him and offer up ideas, or me since it's on my account. *shrug*
5310337 don't look at me im not the idea guy , that's all on you.....
5310308 Well good news we do plan to add more to this.
Looks like Celestia can't admit that she's wrong, and is being let off the hook for regressing her student for her own selfish desires. How could anyone possibly be willing to support Celestia after all that?
You know, is it sad if I think Night Light actually has a point for wanting to overthrow Celestia for what she did? She did it once, and what's to stop her from doing it again?
Yes, Night Light is probably taking things too far by siding with nobels who are probably just hoping to be rewarded with a position in the new government, but does Celestia truly deserve her crown when she regressed her own student for the sake of her selfish desires?
DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!
Well, let's hope the spell worked.
YAY TWILIGHT IS BACK
! Or is she?
5464949 I sure hope so. Maybe seeing his daughter return to her normal state of mind will be enough to at least get Nightlight to tone down his desires for revenge. I still say he's fully in the right to want Princess Celestia to be dethroned. After all she's done, she doesn't deserve to be in power.
Cudos to Twilight for giving Celestia the well deserved "Reason you suck speech".
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The sotry kickign off everything beforehand, and with the Good End, is here in the link.
well , that's kind of an awkward tone for this fic to sustain , it's gonna be just liek this for the rest of it too isn't it?.....
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What do you mean by that? Odd phrasing? Creberus Syndrome?
5935670 where it started off as 'bed end regression fetish' and turned into 'why the fuck did we let this happen? time to fix this shit'....
"Creberus Syndrome?"??....
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There was not much of a plot otherwise. And you said it looked like it had just begun, when this fic started.
5938522 because it had :l ....?....
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And the rest of this is the plot development. I mean, where it coudl have gone otherwise, iwthotu a decent plot?
5939600 half the majority of the other diaper fics on this site half of where it's currently going? idk what we're talking about at this point.....
6418634 I dont' know ask Daxn that question its' his universe
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You'd need to read "From The Start" to get that.
I guessed that luna was giving regressed!Twi "nightmares" about herself